~A Wisp of Sand~ a a desert cat tribe rp

[Jessica Thompson]

Meooow Petra says) hi fly I'm Petra wanna catch a lizard?!(she asks as a question

 

[Amer]

(Not trying to be rude, but could you use quotation marks and other punctuation. Otherwise it is hard to read.)

 

[Amer]

(@blackdust951 )

 

[Jessica Thompson]

Oh sorry

 

[Amer]

(It's ok. Every body makes mistakes. I know you are new. Also.... to make things make ever more sense parenthesis can surround what you are saying, and not the story so it all flows together.)

 

[Jessica Thompson]

(Thanks at least someone gets me)

 

[Amer]

(Oooooo! LILJOE IS HERE! Do you want to reply with Willow?)

 

[LilJoe]

(I haz two statements to make

1) THERE'S A CHAT THREAD PPLE
2) I forgot what all my charries were. Was it Brook, Romeo, Ming-Ming, and Willow?)
3) That was four
4) that was five
5)" six)

 

[Amer]

(Hmmm. I don't know. The member page is on page six, but it doesn't have many of yours. I know you have a melanistic sand cat name Luna also.)

 

[Amer]

(Plus I made a member, member page for putting the charries that River missed or edit them.)