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[Rose Quartz]

I looked at reference pics, & it turned out a lot better & more like the dog I was trying to draw. Any more changes you think I should make?
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wow. good job!

 

[HeavensHens88]

SCREEMMMMMMMM
HOA
WHY YOU NO TELL ME THINGS???

THATS IT. EVERYONE IN THE TIME OUT CORNER. NOW.

*Is still huddling in said corner two weeks later*

 

[FrankieDoodle]

wow. good job!

Thank you!

 

[HeavensHens88]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I LOVE IT
Although Misty doesnt have long enough hair to make a ponytail, I like how that turned out though ;o
I agree with Taming and Rose on the fact that his neck and ear look a little odd with the fact that his head looks a bit weird also, but I dun wanna be a r00d boi and point out flaws... Unless you want me too?

I CANNOT wait to see XD

:3 Yee, approval!
I shall fix as you command. :3
No, no, no, I want you to put me down as much as you can. I fixed the ear, but I'm still iffy on the neck...it's too thick...looks like a tree trunk...imo...

 

[HeavensHens88]

Any tips for this?
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I looked at reference pics, & it turned out a lot better & more like the dog I was trying to draw. Any more changes you think I should make?
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Woah. The way you remodeled it changed the whole dog. It looks wonderful! Were you going for a Doberman, by chance?
The only thing I'd suggest is to maybe make the neck less thick. I always have that problem myself.

 

[FrankieDoodle]

Woah. The way you remodeled it changed the whole dog. It looks wonderful! Were you going for a Doberman, by chance?
The only thing I'd suggest is to maybe make the neck less thick. I always have that problem myself.

Thanks! Yep, I was! Ok

 

[FrankieDoodle]

Woah. The way you remodeled it changed the whole dog. It looks wonderful! Were you going for a Doberman, by chance?
The only thing I'd suggest is to maybe make the neck less thick. I always have that problem myself.

More like this? Also, I made the head a little flatter. Which do you prefer, the flat or the round head?

 

[HeavensHens88]

More like this? Also, I made the head a little flatter. Which do you prefer, the flat or the round head?
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This by far matches the breed posture the best.
Dobies have sleek heads, so flatter is great!!

 

[Amer]

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More like this? Also, I made the head a little flatter. Which do you prefer, the flat or the round head?
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great! The chest still looks off... I dunno if you can fix that. A reference might help... but probably better than what I could do so

 

[FrankieDoodle]

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great! The chest still looks off... I dunno if you can fix that. A reference might help... but probably better than what I could do so

Thanks! Do you think this looks better Or worse?