Art School

[Fanci Feathers Marans]

I didn’t do the backgrounds because I was rushing a bit. View attachment 1456053

Is nice., I like the mood and how you took the time to make different shape and size panels.
One thing that helps turn pages is conflict, so instead of Damian just agreeing to go, maybe he should ask why, offer a reason to stay, or ask whoever why they are there.
Your timing is good, though. That's something everyone struggles with.
I kind of like your handwriting. I'm not sure how, but you can make letters into a font in certain programs. Not sure if it's something you want to mess with, but it's a thought.

 

[Fanci Feathers Marans]

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So, here's what I was working on for "Armour".
Didn't come out like I wanted, there's a bunch I see wrong with it (for example, I have no idea how to add distance), but I can't be bothered with it anymore. XD

This is very interesting, something I've always liked is a good dinosaur dystopia. To create distance, you have to merge the raptor onto one layer and use Gaussian Blur and/or make it bluer, which I think you did.
The knight looks interesting, and I like how you went ahead and brushed in a background/foreground for contrast, but I think maybe it needs some more bold highlights, and maybe some contrasting color on the aurmor somewhere. Other than that I think it looks like a really nice piece. The colors are good and don't "argue with each other" for lack of a concise word. I really like the raptor's harness, and how you've went ahead and put aurmor on it, too. Well done. ^_^

 

[Rose Quartz]

I didn’t do the backgrounds because I was rushing a bit. View attachment 1456053

The backgrounds look done to me. *o* it's so pretty and sparkly Love his eyes.

 

[Rose Quartz]

View attachment 1456203
So, here's what I was working on for "Armour".
Didn't come out like I wanted, there's a bunch I see wrong with it (for example, I have no idea how to add distance), but I can't be bothered with it anymore. XD

The raptor looks like it's behind her. is that what you mean?

 

[Yowza Wowza]

Is nice., I like the mood and how you took the time to make different shape and size panels.
One thing that helps turn pages is conflict, so instead of Damian just agreeing to go, maybe he should ask why, offer a reason to stay, or ask whoever why they are there.
Your timing is good, though. That's something everyone struggles with.
I kind of like your handwriting. I'm not sure how, but you can make letters into a font in certain programs. Not sure if it's something you want to mess with, but it's a thought.

Yeah I should’ve added some backstory to it because I only understand what’s going on xD.
It’s just that he’s leaving the city where all his close friends are, to pursue more strength. So he’s taking one last look at the moon before him and his lil group move on to another location. (So after the long break, one of the members ask if they should head out)
Yeah there’s text, but I just went with my handwriting.

The backgrounds look done to me. *o* it's so pretty and sparkly Love his eyes.

Oh no I’m saying I used backgrounds for the internet because I didn’t have time to do them myself XD I should’ve stated that.
Thank you

 

[Yowza Wowza]

View attachment 1456203
So, here's what I was working on for "Armour".
Didn't come out like I wanted, there's a bunch I see wrong with it (for example, I have no idea how to add distance), but I can't be bothered with it anymore. XD

 

[Rose Quartz]

Yeah I should’ve added some backstory to it because I only understand what’s going on xD.
It’s just that he’s leaving the city where all his close friends are, to pursue more strength. So he’s taking one last look at the moon before him and his lil group move on to another location. (So after the long break, one of the members ask if they should head out)
Yeah there’s text, but I just went with my handwriting.
Oh no I’m saying I used backgrounds for the internet because I didn’t have time to do them myself XD I should’ve stated that.
Thank you

You have really neat writing. I didn't notice it was handwritten.

 

[Yowza Wowza]

You have really neat writing. I didn't notice it was handwritten.

I think I have really bad handwriting but thank you <3 I appreciate it

 

[Fanci Feathers Marans]

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I think I have really bad handwriting but thank you <3 I appreciate it

She didn't use a BTS meme. It's not Smol Pastry! It's an imposta pastry! Someone call da police!

 

[Yowza Wowza]

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She didn't use a BTS meme. It's not Smol Pastry! It's an imposta pastry! Someone call da police!