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I made more changes, so let me know what you think. I'd also like to change the title and would like some suggestions. :D
 
This section:
"How do I know if I should be administering medication orally?"
.....is a repeat of intro.

"turn the lights off"
How can you read the scale if the lights are off?
..maybe needs clarifier....dark to calm help calm bird....flash or head light to read scale.

Might say more about how to figure out what meds are needed and how to find accurate dosages....or clarify in intro about finding meds, some may be available in oral form and some may not, or just 'if you have an oral med, here's how to give it.'

Seems fine but...maybe.... Safely Administering Oral Medications to Poultry

That's all I got.
 
This section:
"How do I know if I should be administering medication orally?"
.....is a repeat of intro.

"turn the lights off"
How can you read the scale if the lights are off?
..maybe needs clarifier....dark to calm help calm bird....flash or head light to read scale.

Might say more about how to figure out what meds are needed and how to find accurate dosages....or clarify in intro about finding meds, some may be available in oral form and some may not, or just 'if you have an oral med, here's how to give it.'

Seems fine but...maybe.... Safely Administering Oral Medications to Poultry

That's all I got.
:goodpost:, let me see what I can come up with!
 

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