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purelypoultry
Songster
I thank you so much for reading and what you have contributed to my paper.
I do understand that the paper I wrote is actually about Genetic Diversity. I started writing the paper with Biodiversity as the topic and had to narrow down the focus as I already had enough content to write the paper needed for my class. I will consider genetic diversity as a separate topic and separate paper from Biodiversity on poultry farms.
I also wanted to address this as a problem and solution format and only got through the problem phase. I will be adding the solution parts in the future.
Solutions I had resolved to be
i. Gene Banks
ii. Genetic diversity within a strain.
iii. biologically diverse ecosystem on a poultry farm
iv. breeders directory
v. breed clubs
vi. strong national organizations
vii. poultry shows
viii. more people raising these endangered chicken, duck, goose, and turkey breeds.
For my class I was doing MLA, but I can switch to APA for this project.
TADKERSON, Are you a professor that you are working with formal scientific research papers? I will address these suggestions in my next revision. This was the first time I had shown other poultry people this paper and wanted some feedback on it before I invested more work into it.
I do enjoy a lively discussion on Genetic Diversity.
I do understand that the paper I wrote is actually about Genetic Diversity. I started writing the paper with Biodiversity as the topic and had to narrow down the focus as I already had enough content to write the paper needed for my class. I will consider genetic diversity as a separate topic and separate paper from Biodiversity on poultry farms.
I also wanted to address this as a problem and solution format and only got through the problem phase. I will be adding the solution parts in the future.
Solutions I had resolved to be
i. Gene Banks
ii. Genetic diversity within a strain.
iii. biologically diverse ecosystem on a poultry farm
iv. breeders directory
v. breed clubs
vi. strong national organizations
vii. poultry shows
viii. more people raising these endangered chicken, duck, goose, and turkey breeds.
For my class I was doing MLA, but I can switch to APA for this project.
TADKERSON, Are you a professor that you are working with formal scientific research papers? I will address these suggestions in my next revision. This was the first time I had shown other poultry people this paper and wanted some feedback on it before I invested more work into it.
I do enjoy a lively discussion on Genetic Diversity.