BYC Poetry Club!

MKK, what do you mean not very good? Oh, I've seen ever so much worse!!! Keep writing here, and you will improve loads. Just takes time, you clearly have a natural gift for it.
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Do not be sad or dejected,
when in poetry errer is detected.
Time heals all things,
and of talent it brings,
fruition! Your skills are elected.
 
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Thanks Marty

An eagle is perched up in a tree
He flies away, and soars so free
he flies in circles watching his prey


he swoops and catches a hare
some say thats just not fair.
 
When in doubt
Don't fret about
Watch and see
For this world is full of intricacies

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That's nice!


Am I locked within a house?
Do I still know the way to my dreams?
We get old and life seems to slow
itself and be mired in scheme's.

I have not forgotten my hopes for tomorrow
but today I won't take time to follow
the butterfly leading me back in time
making today seem hollow.
 
I stare into the flames sadly
For I have behaved badly
I'm afraid, and fearful
But I know I should be cheerful


I'm swimming in tears
with all my fears
the flame goes out, I can see no more
But God is with me, so I will not fear therefore


I look up, and amazingly I can see light! What a sight.
I see the stars, in the sky
I start to cry.
(This poem is really random)
 
I stare into the flames sadly
For I have behaved badly
I'm afraid, and fearful
But I know I should be cheerful


I'm swimming in tears
with all my fears
the flame goes out, I can see no more
But God is with me, so I will not fear therefore


I look up, and amazingly I can see light! What a sight.
I see the stars, in the sky
I start to cry.
(This poem is really random)

That's really good!
 

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