BYC Poetry Club!

[Ducclelover10]

Cool, kinda hard to understand though. Whats it talking about?
Thanks!

Thanks!
It's talking about how I was feeling when I wrote it! And I was thinking that I need to get in the shower but I was Having fun on BYC.

 

[BantamFan4Life]

I have come to this place,
At a steady pace,
Not to run a race,
But to face my fear,
Hoping it will not appear,
I walk into the shadows.
Many thoughts run through my head,
Thoughts about what is ahead,
What sicknesses could be spread.
I look around and see only darkness,
I do not think of a positive remark,
For I am afraid of the dark,
If only they was some sort of spark,
To get away from the dark.
I hear something approach,
Almost that sounded like a cockroach,
It came nearer and nearer,
Until I could feel the smell of death,
Merely in his breath.
I took a step back,
Only to see the utter black,
For I wish to see what is lurking beside me,
Oh, I wish to see the light,
For I just want something bright.
I feel the creature take a step closer almost in my face,
Only wanting some grace,
But this creature would not give an embrace,
But merely some of disgrace.
I feel it step on my little feet,
There was no running back,
Out of this black.
I was finished.
I felt it come closer to me,
I was finished, I was finished!
Only to diminish!
I felt it grab me,
How I wished to see,
What this horrible creature to be,
And once again thought with glee,
I am finished! I am finished!
Only to diminish!
When suddenly a light,
Something very bright,
Was seen in this horrible night,
I looked over to see what was causing this fight,
I could see this menace because of the light,
But I saw nothing.
This menace was merely a thought of my imagination,
This gave me great invigoration,
That all those fears,
All those worries,
All these trials,
Were merely fearful thoughts of my imagination.
For the dark is not scary,
So do not be wary,
For just be as merry,
As it would be,
In the bright shining sun.

 

[Sandstorm495]

I have come to this place,
At a steady pace,
Not to run a race,
But to face my fear,
Hoping it will not appear,
I walk into the shadows.
Many thoughts run through my head,
Thoughts about what is ahead,
What sicknesses could be spread.
I look around and see only darkness,
I do not think of a positive remark,
For I am afraid of the dark,
If only they was some sort of spark,
To get away from the dark.
I hear something approach,
Almost that sounded like a cockroach,
It came nearer and nearer,
Until I could feel the smell of death,
Merely in his breath.
I took a step back,
Only to see the utter black,
For I wish to see what is lurking beside me,
Oh, I wish to see the light,
For I just want something bright.
I feel the creature take a step closer almost in my face,
Only wanting some grace,
But this creature would not give an embrace,
But merely some of disgrace.
I feel it step on my little feet,
There was no running back,
Out of this black.
I was finished.
I felt it come closer to me,
I was finished, I was finished!
Only to diminish!
I felt it grab me,
How I wished to see,
What this horrible creature to be,
And once again thought with glee,
I am finished! I am finished!
Only to diminish!
When suddenly a light,
Something very bright,
Was seen in this horrible night,
I looked over to see what was causing this fight,
But I saw nothing,
It was merely a thought of my imagination,
This gave me great invigoration,
For I will never be afraid of the dark again...
Never again..........

Quite good!

 

[BantamFan4Life]

Quite good!

Thanks!

 

[Sandstorm495]

I might join if that's ok..I have to make up a poem first though!

 

[BantamFan4Life]

I might join if that's ok..I have to make up a poem first though!

Cool! Thanks for joining! Unfortunately I cannot put you on the member list because it won't let me edit the post :/

 

[newcutesgaw12]

i write poetrie!

my pet tarnatula
furry , scurry , scary she mite be
allll'z she waunts is a hugses!!!
pour lil mite
whut a frite you caused
in her lil beatin hart
scurry , scurries thru the taebles legs
aways frum big feets like yourn!!
lil hart a-beatin so fast
she crie's and crie's!!!!!!!!!

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

i write poetrie!

my pet tarnatula
furry , scurry , scary she mite be
allll'z she waunts is a hugses!!!
pour lil mite
whut a frite you caused
in her lil beatin hart
scurry , scurries thru the taebles legs
aways frum big feets like yourn!!
lil hart a-beatin so fast
she crie's and crie's!!!!!!!!!

Do you really have a Tarantula?

 

[newcutesgaw12]

yes! but she died cuz some1 step'd on her.

they thought she was a wild wulf spider -------in a way thi's iz like her remembrance...always have spezial places in my hart for debbie.

Do you really have a Tarantula?

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

yes! but she died cuz some1 step'd on her.

they thought she was a wild wulf spider -------in a way thi's iz like her remembrance...always have spezial places in my hart for debbie.

oh