BYC Poetry Club!

[BantamFan4Life]

Nice! Just a tip you should capitalize the I ; it's proper English.

 

[crazyfarmer]

Nice! Just a tip you should capitalize the I ; it's proper English.

just some typos

 

[BantamFan4Life]

Okay, sorry.

 

[Ducclelover10]

I am such a wreck,
I've got a massive snag in my neck.
Anxiety levels high,
I can't even have pie.
I have an eye twitch,
From so much stress.
I sure wish I had less,
Of all of these things,
But some more sleep would be really nice,
And I'd like some crushed ice.

 

[TheCrazyClucker]

I miss you

I miss you even though
We never met
i miss your arms around me
even though we never touched
I miss your soothing words even though
We never said hello
i miss that feeling, the one you have
when you found the one
even though we never hugged
i miss your tender lips even though
We never kissed
I miss you even though
I may never find you

 

[BantamFan4Life]

I am such a wreck,
I've got a massive snag in my neck.
Anxiety levels high,
I can't even have pie.
I have an eye twitch,
From so much stress.
I sure wish I had less,
Of all of these things,
But some more sleep would be really nice,
And I'd like some crushed ice.

, why so sad?

 

[TheCrazyClucker]

Do you have something against sad poems? You criticized mine for being "sad". Like I said, I write what I feel and maybe that's what she does too.

 

[chickenoverlord]

Before anyone starts a crap storm, make sure that she/he means sad in a bad way.

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

Great poems!

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

Do you have something against sad poems? You criticized mine for being "sad". Like I said, I write what I feel and maybe that's what she does too.

Thats what I do