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[brooster]

okiechick57 if you make a site, i want to see it.

 

[Chirpy]

Hi Dylan - Great job! I enjoyed your site - the pictures are wonderful. Here are some things you might want to change:

1) Anytime you say I capitalize it "I" not "i".
2) Anytime you use the name of a breed of animal you should capitalize the name Buff Orpington - not buff orpington.
3) On your first page you missed the "l" in live.
4) On your Buff Orp page: thay should be they, the "they" in "They are also..." should be capitalized. I would suggest a semi colon (

before 'after large brown egg...'
5) On your Brahma page: easily is spelled wrong, again use a capital I instead of 'i'.
6) On the For Sale page: "They" should be capitalized and very is spelled wrong, as is available, another "I"
7) On your Contact page: Grand Rapids, Ohio should all be capitalized and there should be a comma between Rapids and Ohio
8) On your About Me page: "This" should be capitalized, another "I" and individual is spelled wrong.

I homeschool our kids so this stuff usually jumps out at me but I certainly may have missed something. I am guessing you want your page to be as professional as possible since you have put such great effort into it; thus my lengthy helps.

 

[okiechick57]

Quote:
Chirpy..... I will call on you when I do mine.....I am ole and senile just about

 

[brooster]

Ok i think i am done with those pages for a while, I am sick of looking at them.

 

[brooster]

I lied i made another page