Dawning of war ~ RP

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When Noah came to,
His vision was blurry and pain shot through his whole body. He got to his feet and ran. His head hurt, but he didn't stop. He spotted two girls. One holding the other. He ran up and took the girl off her shoulders and pulled her over his own shoulder. "RUN!!!" He screamed over the explosion. He grabbed her arm and began to run, Julie stumbling after him.
 
MollyBrownROX13 said:
When Noah came to,
His vision was blurry and pain shot through his whole body. He got to his feet and ran. His head hurt, but he didn't stop. He spotted two girls. One holding the other. He ran up and took the girl off her shoulders and pulled her over his own shoulder. "RUN!!!" He screamed over the explosion. He grabbed her arm and began to run, Julie stumbling after him.
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Wintent let out a cry of pain as she was moved the glass sharp moving deeper.
 
Wintent said:
Wintent let out a cry of pain as she was moved the glass sharp moving deeper.
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Noah and Julie ran into the forest, miles from the city. It was their only hope of surviving at the moment.

Once they were deep enough into the forest, Noah stopped and set wintent down carefully. "She's hurt bad...." He said, staying calm. "There's glass stuck in one of her wounds... I'm gunna have to remove the shards..." He said as he looked at the shards of glass that were dug deep into her wound. "I'm gunna need some water and cloth if you can find it...." Julie nodded and ran off to find the supplies.
 
MollyBrownROX13 said:
Noah and Julie ran into the forest, miles from the city. It was their only hope of surviving at the moment.

Once they were deep enough into the forest, Noah stopped and set wintent down carefully. "She's hurt bad...." He said, staying calm. "There's glass stuck in one of her wounds... I'm gunna have to remove the shards..." He said as he looked at the shards of glass that were dug deep into her wound. "I'm gunna need some water and cloth if you can find it...." Julie nodded and ran off to find the supplies.
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Wintent laid there quietly breathing deeply blood gushing from the wound.
 
Zinnia-Hen said:
( I'm trying to show you how this could be some potentially offensive material, and why you might want to change that. Seriously, kids. World war two wasn't fun, neither was it something people thought they could actually get through, nor was it "kawaii".
On that note, I'm going to slide out of here. )
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(I changed it ok? I learned about it last year. It was a simple mistake. I've been reading a book about Germans bombing the cay islands. I got them mixed up... :/)
 
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Wintent said:
Wintent laid there quietly breathing deeply blood gushing from the wound.
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Noah put a bit of pressure on her wound, making sure to cu off the blood flow to the wound. Julie returned with a bowl like container that was partly blown off, full of water. "This is all I could find..." She said, frightened for the girl's life. Noah nodded. "That's fine..." He said "now..." he said to wintent. "this might sting..." he said softly as he poured the water on her wound.
 

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