Dawning of war ~ RP

[Zinnia-Hen]

Quote: ( Look, I'm not mad/upset/etc, but I think there's a chance you might be. Again, I'm sorry. It's just a game, not something to get worked up about. I just wanted to give a little clarification. )

 

[Wintent]

Eliza followed, still crying.

Joushua stopped after they where a little ways in the forest. "Are you alright?!"

Noah put a bit of pressure on her wound, making sure to cu off the blood flow to the wound. Julie returned with a bowl like container that was partly blown off, full of water. "This is all I could find..." She said, frightened for the girl's life. Noah nodded. "That's fine..." He said "now..." he said to wintent. "this might sting..." he said softly as he poured the water on her wound.

Wintent bite her lip tears leaking from her tightly shuteyes as pain erupted in her side.

 

[MollyBrownROX13]

( Look, I'm not mad/upset/etc, but I think there's a chance you might be. Again, I'm sorry. It's just a game, not something to get worked up about. I just wanted to give a little clarification. )

(..... I understand. But I don't like to be criticized... I get enough of that at home and school. :/)

 

[Bluebee]

Quote:
Eliza gasped for a breath, and shook her head quickly. "N-no, I don't think so," she replied, lifting her hand. It was covered in blood.

 

[Wintent]

Eliza gasped for a breath, and shook her head quickly. "N-no, I don't think so," she replied, lifting her hand. It was covered in blood.

Joushua's eyes widened," Where's the wound?" He demanded.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Quote:
( I get it. Everyone's a critic, as the saying goes. But that's just a big part of life, something you'll see in every corner of the world that you can't really escape. It's not a bad thing, though, it can be very good, which is why it plays such a large role in RPs. It gives the viewer's opinion(s) and if needed, it can help straighten things out. )

 

[Bluebee]

Quote:
Eliza turned so that he could see her upper arm. There was a large gash in it.

 

[Bluebee]

(Hello?)

 

[Wintent]

Eliza turned so that he could see her upper arm. There was a large gash in it.

"Ow..." joushua muttered. He wasn't a doctur but he was pretty sure you weren't exposed to be losing blood that fast.

 

[Bluebee]

Quote: Eliza's vision suddenly went black, and she fell to the ground, unconscious.