Haven't seen one of these and have always wanted my own RPG.
This is my first RPG, so If you see some how I can improve it, all suggestions welcome!
I don't have a huge long story line, Just make a Raptor. ANY Raptor you want. Of any country. Hawks, eagles, kites, harriers, falcons etc even Vultures are allowed as they are carrion eating raptors.
NO POWERS but you can detect natural phenomenon. eg: Tell when a storm is coming/fire or detect where water is or where prey is.
You can only choose 2 of these detections. If you have one you like that I have not listed put it in any way and I will say yay or nay.
You can only mate with your own kind of raptor eg: kite with kite or eagle with eagle.
You don't have to get specific eg: a wedge tailed eagle can mate with a Bald eagle. Just as long as it is roughly the same specie of raptor. No harriers crossing with eagles etc.
NO DETAILS with mating. KEEP IT PG!!!!!!!
You can make as many characters as you want but you can't make your own characters mate with each other!
GROUPS - You can make a family, 2 parents and as many chicks as that breed would naturally have in the wild.
You can unite with other family's to enlarge your family although this only works if you are of the same breed of raptor.
You can though unite with other breeds of raptors but you won't be able to breed with them.
Fights/ WARS - You can war against any family or group of even an individual. ONLY ONE ATTACK EVERY POST!
If you are attacking some one they can only die if I and that character says they can. You can't just say you scratched him in the face and he dies. Make It realistic!!!!!!!!!
This is the form to fill out!
Name:
Name of user:
Breed of raptor:
Gender:
Age:
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) 2)
Chicks:
History:
Picture:
Personality:
Environment you live in: eg: Alpine wood, dessert.
HOPE THIS IS A HIT!!! remember, any suggestions to make this better are much appreciated.
MEMBERS!!!
Name: Marzipan
Name of user: CluckCluckLuke
Breed of raptor: Honey Buzzard ( Buzzard ) European.
Gender: Male
Age: 1 yr
Mate: No on yet.
What you detect: 1) Storms 2) Insects
Chicks: NON yet
History: Just came from a Family were my father was dark and aggressive, no mercy and Am looking to start my own group. Perhaps a battle group.
Picture:

Personality: Not to sure yet Oh his personality, Sort of shy at the moment. But can adapt to any situation and climate/ region.
Environment you live in: Woodlands.
Name: Lydia
Name of user: iluvorpingtons
Breed of raptor: Snail Kite (Everglade Kite)
Gender: Female
Age: 9 years
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) Predators 2) Prey
Chicks: None Yet
History: She grew up in a swamp that was shrinking so her life with her family was hard. One of her siblings starved to death but she survived by becoming the most greedy chick when her mother or father fed them. She felt very bad about that later in her life, but she knew it had probably saved her. When she had finished branching she flew west until she found a better place to live.
Picture:
Personality: She is very cautious and jumpy if she feels something around her isn't right. While she prefers to live alone she is very careful when she encounters something new. She likes to do good but is not above acting greedily if it will save her.
Environment you live in: (eg: Alpine wood, dessert.) Swamps/Marshes
Name: Amber
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: barn owl
Gender: F
Age: 2
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) other raptors' emotions (when they're nearby) 2) fire
Chicks: none yet
History: none
Picture:

Personality: generally sweet, has a lot of moxy, brave. a little unpredictable.
Environment you live in: forest
Name: Razor
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: barred owl
Gender: M
Age: 2
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1)sickness 2) water
Chicks: none
History: none
Picture:

Personality: can be very fierce in a fight, but is not evil.
Environment you live in: forest
Name: Panther
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: bald eagle
Gender: F
Age: 4
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) friends 2)foes
Chicks: none
History: none
Picture: none
Personality: loyal, slightly self-absorbed, considers herself 'cool'.
Environment you live in: in a cave on a mountain.
Here's my form:
Name: Bullet
Name of user: TheCrazyClucker
Breed of raptor: Barred Owl
Gender: M
Age: 5
Mate: (I can update this later when you make one)
What you detect: 1) the feelings of other raptors' 2) water
Chicks: none yet
History: doesn't talk about it
Picture:
Personality: He's wise and brave
Environment you live in: Forest
Name: Mika
Name of user: TheCrazyClucker
Breed of raptor: Red-Tailed Hawk
Gender: F
Age: 3
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) the thoughts of other raptors' 2) prey
Chicks: none
History: Was abandoned by her mother
Picture:
Personality: nice and caring, but hard-headed, tough, brave, stubborn, entitled to her own opinion, and tends to talk before she thinks
Environment you live in: Forest
Name: Lily.
Breed: Little Owl.
Gender: Female.
Age: 1.
History: Unknown.
Personality: Lily is shy, she does not talk much, and when she does, she is very timid.
Environment: Forest.
Username: Feanor Nenharma.

This is my first RPG, so If you see some how I can improve it, all suggestions welcome!
I don't have a huge long story line, Just make a Raptor. ANY Raptor you want. Of any country. Hawks, eagles, kites, harriers, falcons etc even Vultures are allowed as they are carrion eating raptors.
NO POWERS but you can detect natural phenomenon. eg: Tell when a storm is coming/fire or detect where water is or where prey is.
You can only choose 2 of these detections. If you have one you like that I have not listed put it in any way and I will say yay or nay.
You can only mate with your own kind of raptor eg: kite with kite or eagle with eagle.
You don't have to get specific eg: a wedge tailed eagle can mate with a Bald eagle. Just as long as it is roughly the same specie of raptor. No harriers crossing with eagles etc.
NO DETAILS with mating. KEEP IT PG!!!!!!!
You can make as many characters as you want but you can't make your own characters mate with each other!
GROUPS - You can make a family, 2 parents and as many chicks as that breed would naturally have in the wild.
You can unite with other family's to enlarge your family although this only works if you are of the same breed of raptor.
You can though unite with other breeds of raptors but you won't be able to breed with them.
Fights/ WARS - You can war against any family or group of even an individual. ONLY ONE ATTACK EVERY POST!
If you are attacking some one they can only die if I and that character says they can. You can't just say you scratched him in the face and he dies. Make It realistic!!!!!!!!!
This is the form to fill out!
Name:
Name of user:
Breed of raptor:
Gender:
Age:
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) 2)
Chicks:
History:
Picture:
Personality:
Environment you live in: eg: Alpine wood, dessert.
HOPE THIS IS A HIT!!! remember, any suggestions to make this better are much appreciated.

















































MEMBERS!!!
Name: Marzipan
Name of user: CluckCluckLuke
Breed of raptor: Honey Buzzard ( Buzzard ) European.
Gender: Male
Age: 1 yr
Mate: No on yet.
What you detect: 1) Storms 2) Insects
Chicks: NON yet
History: Just came from a Family were my father was dark and aggressive, no mercy and Am looking to start my own group. Perhaps a battle group.
Picture:
Personality: Not to sure yet Oh his personality, Sort of shy at the moment. But can adapt to any situation and climate/ region.
Environment you live in: Woodlands.
Name: Lydia
Name of user: iluvorpingtons
Breed of raptor: Snail Kite (Everglade Kite)
Gender: Female
Age: 9 years
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) Predators 2) Prey
Chicks: None Yet
History: She grew up in a swamp that was shrinking so her life with her family was hard. One of her siblings starved to death but she survived by becoming the most greedy chick when her mother or father fed them. She felt very bad about that later in her life, but she knew it had probably saved her. When she had finished branching she flew west until she found a better place to live.
Picture:
Personality: She is very cautious and jumpy if she feels something around her isn't right. While she prefers to live alone she is very careful when she encounters something new. She likes to do good but is not above acting greedily if it will save her.
Environment you live in: (eg: Alpine wood, dessert.) Swamps/Marshes
Name: Amber
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: barn owl
Gender: F
Age: 2
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) other raptors' emotions (when they're nearby) 2) fire
Chicks: none yet
History: none
Picture:
Personality: generally sweet, has a lot of moxy, brave. a little unpredictable.
Environment you live in: forest
Name: Razor
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: barred owl
Gender: M
Age: 2
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1)sickness 2) water
Chicks: none
History: none
Picture:
Personality: can be very fierce in a fight, but is not evil.
Environment you live in: forest
Name: Panther
Name of user: CayugaLover
Breed of raptor: bald eagle
Gender: F
Age: 4
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) friends 2)foes
Chicks: none
History: none
Picture: none

Personality: loyal, slightly self-absorbed, considers herself 'cool'.
Environment you live in: in a cave on a mountain.
Here's my form:
Name: Bullet
Name of user: TheCrazyClucker
Breed of raptor: Barred Owl
Gender: M
Age: 5
Mate: (I can update this later when you make one)
What you detect: 1) the feelings of other raptors' 2) water
Chicks: none yet
History: doesn't talk about it
Picture:

Personality: He's wise and brave
Environment you live in: Forest
Name: Mika
Name of user: TheCrazyClucker
Breed of raptor: Red-Tailed Hawk
Gender: F
Age: 3
Mate: ( I can update this later when you make one )
What you detect: 1) the thoughts of other raptors' 2) prey
Chicks: none
History: Was abandoned by her mother
Picture:

Personality: nice and caring, but hard-headed, tough, brave, stubborn, entitled to her own opinion, and tends to talk before she thinks
Environment you live in: Forest
Name: Lily.
Breed: Little Owl.
Gender: Female.
Age: 1.
History: Unknown.
Personality: Lily is shy, she does not talk much, and when she does, she is very timid.
Environment: Forest.
Username: Feanor Nenharma.
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