Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

[Wintent]

(See what I did? Could you please you quotation marks, more details, how she feels, etc, etc)
(Umm sure.)

(Thanks)

 

[Mipuppy1]

Just then Rosalinda bursted into the compartment, "Oh sorry is this full?" She asked quietly, a male spoke up, she looked in his direction she had seen him around a few times before, she didn't know why people didn't like him, he was very handsome dirty blonde hair, green eyes, tan skin, muscular build, that was all girls in the school cared about...

"No there is one more seat left." Adrian said patting the seat time to him with a wicked smile at the girl, he noticed that she was very pretty- pretty wasn't even the word, beautiful more like, porcelain skin, light blonde hair, blue eyes, feminine body, he had heard that there was 2 girls in the school that contained Veela blood, one from Hufflepuff and one from Ravenclaw, this must be the Hufflepuff one, she seemed very meek.

 

[Wintent]

Just then Rosalinda bursted into the compartment, "Oh sorry is this full?" She asked quietly, a male spoke up, she looked in his direction she had seen him around a few times before, she didn't know why people didn't like him, he was very handsome dirty blonde hair, green eyes, tan skin, muscular build, that was all girls in the school cared about...

"No there is one more seat left." Adrian said patting the seat time to him with a wicked smile at the girl, he noticed that she was very pretty- pretty wasn't even the word, beautiful more like, porcelain skin, light blonde hair, blue eyes, feminine body, he had heard that there was 2 girls in the school that contained Veela blood, one from Hufflepuff and one from Ravenclaw, this must be the Hufflepuff one, she seemed very meek. 

Wintent looked at the direction Rosalinda came. She reconized her quickly easy enough from to reconize cause of her beauty. Wintent smiled at her, a closed eye smile then looked at BB's cage in her lap and gently stuck her finger in the cage stroking her head.

 

[Perfect Polish]

"So are you all ready for quittich to start" Shadow said. She glanced at the girl that entered the compartment. " I just got a new broom; a fire bolt" " I just had the nimbus 2000 before"

 

[Mipuppy1]

(Shadow?)

 

[Perfect Polish]

ya sorry forgot to put my name

 

[Mipuppy1]

"Thank you." Rosalinda, stumbled awkwardly across the compartment to the seat next to Adrian sitting in the dead center trying not to touch the girl next to her or Adrian. Rosalinda folded her hands in her lap as Yuki walked onto them sitting down and purring contently.

 

[Perfect Polish]

" he's a pretty cat" shadow said looking down at it. " Whats his name".

 

[Mipuppy1]

"She." Rosalinda corrected her quietly, "And her name is Yuki, Yuki means snow in japan and I her coat is the color of snow, but also Yuu, means princess, and Ki means tender so her name means both snow and Tender Princess." Rosalinda quietly explained, then blushed when Adrian snorted laughing, had she said to much?

 

[Perfect Polish]

Sorry. Thats a nice name and fitting for her.