Lakia: The Dark Era

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With a few rapid clicks, he found them easily, as echolocation worked through clouds(It does. The sound bounces off solid/liquid surfaces, not gas.). He flew down and grabbed hold of both Aiden and Mannex.
 
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With a few apid cliks, he fun them asily, as echolocation worked through clouds(It does. The sound bounces off solid/liquid surfaces, not gas.). He flew down and grabbe hold of both Aiden and Manes.
(I know)

The light birds dropped like stones, just out of reach of his claws. Suddenly, a huge updraft caught his wings, throwing him up and away from them.
 
The powerful updraft carried them higher, even with their wings shut. Cross winds sliced through the air, slamming them from side to side and keeping them off course. The birds had disappeared from view.
 
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(That 'powerful updraft' should be carrying them up too. Just saying.) Below the clouds were downdrafts, which buffeted the birds. Gorgos spread his wings, riding the updraft until he could escape, and then he drove into the clouds, and once again fund the birds.
 

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