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fantastic.....tell me!
If anyone steals this, I will hunt you down and Love and Tolerate the heck out of you.
fantastic.....tell me!
If anyone steals this, I will hunt you down and Love and Tolerate the heck out of you.
Chapter 1: Parivere runs away in the rain as people stare. Flashback to the mess of the party that introduces her supposed BF and the sucky king. Parivere bumps into Tomorrow, is shocked at Tomorrow, and gets carted away with Tomorrow to Sakia's lab.
Chapter 2: Tomorrow introduces herself in full, Parivere huffs. They're trapped in a padded room, but Tomorrow frees the two of them thanks to her leet robot powers. She explains the scientists and Sakia is introduced. As the two watch her, they get chased to the rooftop, where they meet If and escape with his help.
Chapter 3: If says that he lost his memory at Filament's lab, so they all go there. If explains the X-Clast, which is what Parivere is clueless about and Tomorrow doesn't quite know it. If says that they're trying to make the X-Clast, which is the girl that can activate the Altar and purify the world of everything and everyone except the Chosen People (Scientists). They all decide to get the X-Clast and stop this, so off to Filament's lab, where they meet Carys and rescue her from her test tube.
Chapter 4: Carys says that Ect is in the middle of making the actual X-Clast, and that she was a failed prototype. Ect's Lab is right next to the Altar, which is in Clustaria, so off they go! If regains his memories about Carys and a bit of his past life, but not much. Character development chapter, too. Reaching Ect's Lab, they find out that they were a little too late, so Carys runs on ahead while Tomorrow, If, and Parivere all stay behind to fight the scientists.
FAILURE. Carys finds out that the girl is in the middle of activating the Altar, but said Altar doesn't have the final piece, which is Tomorrow. Who just died. So, then Claos shows up and laughs at them all before blowing up the planet to smitherenes or however it's spelled.
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Chapter 5: At the beginning, a small apartment in the middle of space is shown. Claos and Alt are officially introduced as Claos berates Alt for trying to "SAVE" people. Then, Alt runs away and fades as the second planet is introduced. We see Ume and Kaze talking to Yustice, who they've just met. Kaze explains FABULOUSLY that they have to go to to the Empire because a creepy guy they just met wants to steal a weapon from Mei, the leader of said Empire. Yustice agrees because she is a dream weapon created by the Sand People, but Ume and Kaze don't know that yeeet.... Anyway, so everyone goes to Mei's awesome palace that is covered in Gothic structure not unlike a Goth Loli JSK and lie their way in because Kaze is the best guy EVER.
Chapter 6: Solid Snaking it! The three sneak into the palace and see Mei, who is hooked up to a ton of machines and tubes. They wonder why she is hooked up so naturally, Yustice blows their cover since she's curious to the point of making the mission fail. Yustice goes up and says hi to Mei and shakes her hand, causing Yustice nightmares. Ume picks up Yustice and the three high-tail it to the labs, where they find Mistiere in a tube. Yustice feels that she knows Mistiere, and immediately unlocks her. Kaze picks up Mistiere, and the FOUR high-tail it out of there.
Chapter 7: At a bar, Yustice and Mistiere introduce each other while Kaze gets in trouble for being a huge braggart. Kaze gets into a bar fight while Ume, Mistiere, and Yustice talk about current events. Yustice says that she found out from looking around Mei's room that she is going to go find the Grimoire, a book that contains every single blue print in the past, present, and future, and that Mei will use it to wipe her people off of the face of the earth. She wonders if they can even do such a thing, simply because it's just a book. Ume says that she and Kaze are brother and sister, outcasts from the descendants of the Mystical Title Girl (Alt), who wielded the Grimoire to save everyone from a horrible demon (Claos). Ume also exposits that the demon either came from the Sand People or the Empire, and no one really knows. As such, the two fight each other in order to get rid of all the evil in the world, since the SP think that the Empire is the demon's empire and vice versa. After Kaze beats up everyone without leaving a scratch on the bar, he walks over and says that it's time to go get the Grimoire. The bartender, mad at Kaze for starting a fight, immediately reports this information to the Empire, and while Yustice sleeps, the 3 people who dream her up search her mind to find out that yes, they know where the Grimoire is. Everyone, and I mean everyone, sets out to go get it.
Chapter 8: Cut to running, racing both groups to the place where the Grimoire is. A few Kaze hijinks ensue regarding getting past his family to get the Grimoire, which is at a large mountain/spire in the middle of a desert. What is it with me and making magical artifacts exist in the middle of deserts? Anyway... To prove that they need it, Mistiere and Yustice, after a heartfelt talk on the wall outside Kaze's house, realize that they are two halves of Alt, and the fuse to form her. Immediately, they gain access to the Grimoire and show up where everyone else is. Alt explains that the whole "Demon" thing was just a metaphor, if I used that correctly, to explain that people shouldn't fight except only when necessary and/or how to deal with evil and things like that and that the Demon never existed. However, just as everyone starts dealing with each other, Claos appears in a puff of black smoke and says that this Alt is actually a fake. Alt explains that she isn't, but a slip up on her part causes Claos to whip out her wand with an evil laugh and smack the planet, causing it all to explode.
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Chapter 9: Claos berates Alt even more, approaching her with a torture device and smiling. Alt shrinks back, hitting one of Claos' steampunk toys, and Claos smacks her. At the smack, Vioanary wakes up and shakes her head, wondering if it was a prophetic dream or not. She realizes that she's actually quite early for school as she quickly eats some toast and dashes out of her apartment, doing the stereotypical "I'm late run to school!" thing that anime often utilizes. She arrives there incredibly early as Ash (Claos) walks up to her. One school day later, the anime club meeting (Ash, Vio, and one other person) runs incredibly late, so she dashes back so as not to miss her anime. Along the way, she bumps into Alt, who is being chased by a bunch of thugs. Alt is chanting something, and Vio recognizes her from her dream, so of course Vio starts beating up the thugs. The thugs overpower Vio, but then Alt tells Vio that she needs to say magical words. (Don't know what, but they should be in Latin!) One Magical Girl transformation later, Vio soundly thrashes the thugs with what is essentially a glorified stick.
Chapter 10: Vio takes Alt back to her place to help her. Alt notices all of the anime merch, and notices a figure of Carys and another one of Ume. Vio says that she can stay there, since, knowing anime, Alt doesn't have a home and is from a different dimension. Alt is somewhat shocked by Vio's state of living, seeing as the apartment is really freaking messy, but doesn't say anything about it. Vio notices that Alt is kind of insane and broken, but also doesn't say anything about it. Haven't these two heard of "Poor Communication Kills"? Anyway, Alt settles down there and comes down with a cold. Vio runs out and goes to buy medicine at the pharmacy, but doesn't quite know what to buy. Vio bumps into Kieran, a fellow student who works there at the pharmacy, and Kieran introduces himself. Awkward dialogue ensues and love subplots ahoy! Kieran goes to her house and is appalled by the clutter. He helps Alt, although is freaked out by her, and tells Vio to straighten up.
Chapter 11: This is basically a wacky montage of Vio taking care of Alt and being a Magical Girl on top of school and managing her home life. Also, character development on Vio's part simply because at the beginning, she's shown to be irresponsible and uncaring about anything at all. Also, Alt opens up ever so slightly and Kieran and Vio start dating! However, Ash invites Vio and Alt for an "Anime Wrap Up" sleepover. Alt doesn't want to go, but Vio drags her along anyway because she doesn't want Alt to be all alone. The anime wrap up sleepover contains footage of the worlds Alt was trying to save ending and exploding. Alt faints from this and is taken to the hospital. Vio has a bit of a BSOD because of all of this happening to the really cute girl who gained her powers and for the fact that her supposed 'best friend' is a horrible troll who abuses said cute girl. Ash says that she'll be expecting her on top of the school in 2 days. Vio goes to a tall roof and contemplates jumping off, since she'll never beat Ash. Just as she jumps...
Chapter 12: Kieran catches Vio from jumping off and tells her that she can beat Ash. He now knows that she's a Magical Girl and doesn't care at all. He kisses her to get her out of the BSOD, and Vio goes and kicks Ash's butt while Ash gloats about how she'll never destroy her, and that she's done this more times than you'd care to know and all that fun stuff. Vio manages to kick Ash's behind with... something. However, at the end of it all, Alt dies. Vio and Kieran get married, too.
Chapter 2: Tomorrow introduces herself in full, Parivere huffs. They're trapped in a padded room, but Tomorrow frees the two of them thanks to her leet robot powers. She explains the scientists and Sakia is introduced. As the two watch her, they get chased to the rooftop, where they meet If and escape with his help.
Chapter 3: If says that he lost his memory at Filament's lab, so they all go there. If explains the X-Clast, which is what Parivere is clueless about and Tomorrow doesn't quite know it. If says that they're trying to make the X-Clast, which is the girl that can activate the Altar and purify the world of everything and everyone except the Chosen People (Scientists). They all decide to get the X-Clast and stop this, so off to Filament's lab, where they meet Carys and rescue her from her test tube.
Chapter 4: Carys says that Ect is in the middle of making the actual X-Clast, and that she was a failed prototype. Ect's Lab is right next to the Altar, which is in Clustaria, so off they go! If regains his memories about Carys and a bit of his past life, but not much. Character development chapter, too. Reaching Ect's Lab, they find out that they were a little too late, so Carys runs on ahead while Tomorrow, If, and Parivere all stay behind to fight the scientists.
FAILURE. Carys finds out that the girl is in the middle of activating the Altar, but said Altar doesn't have the final piece, which is Tomorrow. Who just died. So, then Claos shows up and laughs at them all before blowing up the planet to smitherenes or however it's spelled.
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Chapter 5: At the beginning, a small apartment in the middle of space is shown. Claos and Alt are officially introduced as Claos berates Alt for trying to "SAVE" people. Then, Alt runs away and fades as the second planet is introduced. We see Ume and Kaze talking to Yustice, who they've just met. Kaze explains FABULOUSLY that they have to go to to the Empire because a creepy guy they just met wants to steal a weapon from Mei, the leader of said Empire. Yustice agrees because she is a dream weapon created by the Sand People, but Ume and Kaze don't know that yeeet.... Anyway, so everyone goes to Mei's awesome palace that is covered in Gothic structure not unlike a Goth Loli JSK and lie their way in because Kaze is the best guy EVER.
Chapter 6: Solid Snaking it! The three sneak into the palace and see Mei, who is hooked up to a ton of machines and tubes. They wonder why she is hooked up so naturally, Yustice blows their cover since she's curious to the point of making the mission fail. Yustice goes up and says hi to Mei and shakes her hand, causing Yustice nightmares. Ume picks up Yustice and the three high-tail it to the labs, where they find Mistiere in a tube. Yustice feels that she knows Mistiere, and immediately unlocks her. Kaze picks up Mistiere, and the FOUR high-tail it out of there.
Chapter 7: At a bar, Yustice and Mistiere introduce each other while Kaze gets in trouble for being a huge braggart. Kaze gets into a bar fight while Ume, Mistiere, and Yustice talk about current events. Yustice says that she found out from looking around Mei's room that she is going to go find the Grimoire, a book that contains every single blue print in the past, present, and future, and that Mei will use it to wipe her people off of the face of the earth. She wonders if they can even do such a thing, simply because it's just a book. Ume says that she and Kaze are brother and sister, outcasts from the descendants of the Mystical Title Girl (Alt), who wielded the Grimoire to save everyone from a horrible demon (Claos). Ume also exposits that the demon either came from the Sand People or the Empire, and no one really knows. As such, the two fight each other in order to get rid of all the evil in the world, since the SP think that the Empire is the demon's empire and vice versa. After Kaze beats up everyone without leaving a scratch on the bar, he walks over and says that it's time to go get the Grimoire. The bartender, mad at Kaze for starting a fight, immediately reports this information to the Empire, and while Yustice sleeps, the 3 people who dream her up search her mind to find out that yes, they know where the Grimoire is. Everyone, and I mean everyone, sets out to go get it.
Chapter 8: Cut to running, racing both groups to the place where the Grimoire is. A few Kaze hijinks ensue regarding getting past his family to get the Grimoire, which is at a large mountain/spire in the middle of a desert. What is it with me and making magical artifacts exist in the middle of deserts? Anyway... To prove that they need it, Mistiere and Yustice, after a heartfelt talk on the wall outside Kaze's house, realize that they are two halves of Alt, and the fuse to form her. Immediately, they gain access to the Grimoire and show up where everyone else is. Alt explains that the whole "Demon" thing was just a metaphor, if I used that correctly, to explain that people shouldn't fight except only when necessary and/or how to deal with evil and things like that and that the Demon never existed. However, just as everyone starts dealing with each other, Claos appears in a puff of black smoke and says that this Alt is actually a fake. Alt explains that she isn't, but a slip up on her part causes Claos to whip out her wand with an evil laugh and smack the planet, causing it all to explode.
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Chapter 9: Claos berates Alt even more, approaching her with a torture device and smiling. Alt shrinks back, hitting one of Claos' steampunk toys, and Claos smacks her. At the smack, Vioanary wakes up and shakes her head, wondering if it was a prophetic dream or not. She realizes that she's actually quite early for school as she quickly eats some toast and dashes out of her apartment, doing the stereotypical "I'm late run to school!" thing that anime often utilizes. She arrives there incredibly early as Ash (Claos) walks up to her. One school day later, the anime club meeting (Ash, Vio, and one other person) runs incredibly late, so she dashes back so as not to miss her anime. Along the way, she bumps into Alt, who is being chased by a bunch of thugs. Alt is chanting something, and Vio recognizes her from her dream, so of course Vio starts beating up the thugs. The thugs overpower Vio, but then Alt tells Vio that she needs to say magical words. (Don't know what, but they should be in Latin!) One Magical Girl transformation later, Vio soundly thrashes the thugs with what is essentially a glorified stick.
Chapter 10: Vio takes Alt back to her place to help her. Alt notices all of the anime merch, and notices a figure of Carys and another one of Ume. Vio says that she can stay there, since, knowing anime, Alt doesn't have a home and is from a different dimension. Alt is somewhat shocked by Vio's state of living, seeing as the apartment is really freaking messy, but doesn't say anything about it. Vio notices that Alt is kind of insane and broken, but also doesn't say anything about it. Haven't these two heard of "Poor Communication Kills"? Anyway, Alt settles down there and comes down with a cold. Vio runs out and goes to buy medicine at the pharmacy, but doesn't quite know what to buy. Vio bumps into Kieran, a fellow student who works there at the pharmacy, and Kieran introduces himself. Awkward dialogue ensues and love subplots ahoy! Kieran goes to her house and is appalled by the clutter. He helps Alt, although is freaked out by her, and tells Vio to straighten up.
Chapter 11: This is basically a wacky montage of Vio taking care of Alt and being a Magical Girl on top of school and managing her home life. Also, character development on Vio's part simply because at the beginning, she's shown to be irresponsible and uncaring about anything at all. Also, Alt opens up ever so slightly and Kieran and Vio start dating! However, Ash invites Vio and Alt for an "Anime Wrap Up" sleepover. Alt doesn't want to go, but Vio drags her along anyway because she doesn't want Alt to be all alone. The anime wrap up sleepover contains footage of the worlds Alt was trying to save ending and exploding. Alt faints from this and is taken to the hospital. Vio has a bit of a BSOD because of all of this happening to the really cute girl who gained her powers and for the fact that her supposed 'best friend' is a horrible troll who abuses said cute girl. Ash says that she'll be expecting her on top of the school in 2 days. Vio goes to a tall roof and contemplates jumping off, since she'll never beat Ash. Just as she jumps...
Chapter 12: Kieran catches Vio from jumping off and tells her that she can beat Ash. He now knows that she's a Magical Girl and doesn't care at all. He kisses her to get her out of the BSOD, and Vio goes and kicks Ash's butt while Ash gloats about how she'll never destroy her, and that she's done this more times than you'd care to know and all that fun stuff. Vio manages to kick Ash's behind with... something. However, at the end of it all, Alt dies. Vio and Kieran get married, too.
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