Magic Birdie's class of drawing birds!

Lealonna: Again with the eyes, draw them just the way the picture shows. The area around the pupils could have used a bit more shading. Snowy's head is a bit disproportional. The whole thing could be a bit more detailed. I'll show how to do all these later. Snowy's beak isn't straight like a songbirds'. Her upper beak is bent, and most of the time, you can't see the bottom beak because of her fluff. C+
 
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Quinn4321: You're right, it could have more detail, but the outline is fine, too. Again with the beak's shape, Snowy's beak isn't straight like a songbirds'. Her upper beak is bent, and most of the time, you can't see the bottom beak because of her fluff. For an outline, it is good. I'm not sure how to grade it though... I'll give you a B.
 

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