Minni a chicken story

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by CochinBrahmaLover, Mar 25, 2012.

  1. THIS IS MY STORY, DO NOT TRY AND CLAIM CREDIT. Hope you enjoy :)

    Ch. 1
    Darkness. Darkness...everywhere. Thats how my life started, darkness then blinding light then darkness, the blinding light was every couple days, with 2 black spots on my side, something holding me, then I would see something large and round looking into me, creepy I know. I would squirm and try and get away but I would be trapped. One day something told me to push up, crack the thing trapping me, and engulf air, I wasn't sure what to think about it but I listened to what ever was telling me. Push, pushing, my hard beak and the lump on it poking the round thing, finally, a small beam of blinding light pours in, I gasp and wheeze until I can breathe, Im sticky and wet and I don't need to listen to that voice telling me to keep on cracking the round thing, the cold wetness is enough to keep me going. After what feels like days Im free. Okay well I'm not free, the, what I later learned is called an egg, is completely cracked around and is pouring in light that I enjoy so much. I use the rest of my energy to push my feet, then finally I am free. I sit on my feet, the warmth swirling around my still wet fluff, chirping. I look at my egg, a small light cream colored one, and then I look at the others, a deep brown one that has a small beak sticking out, a green one that appeared dead, an ugly beige colored egg, 2 pinkish eggs and a speckled egg. After a little bit, when I fluffed up, I walked to the deep brown colored one.
    "Hey, who are you?" I ask to the beak.
    "Help!" The voice cried
    "Don't worry, just work and you'll be able get out soon" I reasured it, It seemed to start and hyperventilate. Thats when I realized that, I hatched out of an egg to another egg. The place I was in was warm, but it was round at the top and flat at the bottom (where I was standing), I sat there mad
    "And I'm going to die here"
    "WHAT!" the voice, I happened to be sitting by it, yelled
    "Umm, uh, nevermind.." I say nervous not wanting to make it freak out more, I felt the same when I was hatching. I don't remember much next, cause I nodded off and then woke up with a small blackish chick sitting next to me.
    "AHH!" I screamed and ran around.
    "CALM DOWN! Its okay, I'm the chicken that you talked to when I hatched" He pointed to the deep brown egg.
    "Oh" I said panting tired from the run.
    "I'm Raisinette, who are you?"
    "Minni"
    "What do we do here?"
    "I don't know, wait for the others then die of starvation" I say with an edge still mad about being in another egg. Raisinette walked around the egg, which I guess was actually an incubator, and sat between the 2 pink eggs.
    "Try it, its comfy" He said nodding off. I do the same, between the ugly beige one and the green one, and he was right, it was so comf... What, huh, oh sorry I dozed off, it was so comfy.

    Ch 2


    Well after sleeping for what seemed like days, I woke up and saw 4 new chicks. The 2 pink ones talked at the exact same time, it was really annoying.
    "Hi" they chirped together.
    "Im Paricole" They chirped. Another reason talking at the same time, if they say their names, Paris and Nicole, their names would mix together. The one who hatched from the beige egg sat there in her shell still.
    "Im Naya" she said knowing what I would ask. Raisinette, being more polite then me, said,
    "Im Raisinette, nice to meet you"
    "Im Minni" I say just not wanting to be rude. The one who hatched from the speckled egg, he looked strange, said in a raspy voice
    "Im Pheonix" and thats all she said, I liked her, quiet, not annoying.


    I'll continue later
     
  2. Kevin565

    Kevin565 Chicken Obsessed Premium Member

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  3. lol, thanks
     
  4. Marty1876

    Marty1876 Hi Everyone!

    Kevin and Cochin (hello)

    I llike your story, Cochin. Your a promising writer. You are allready thinking outside yourself (imagining how a chick hatching might feel), and your able to speak in dialogue. You, Kevin, and I feel ok with it, but most people don't seem to. Only us superior creative minds! LOL

    I'll be on in about 2 hours or less.........
     
  5. DONT LEAVE!!! NO DONT LEAVE!!!! [​IMG]


    Thanks, I was taking a shower when I thought of the idea [​IMG]
     
  6. Marty1876

    Marty1876 Hi Everyone!

    OMG, I have a great idea!!! You have like an hour before Kevin is supposed to come (830 our time, but its 730 here now). If you write a story, and iinclude some pics (you know, put it togather, and copy and then go post) we can do our presents togather, but they are different. It would make her feel so special that we did something togather for her.

    I planned a little pictoral that is something like this (I have to go w/it - but I was gonna say I researved a nice restaurant (pic) invited all your BYC Friends (pic) had dinner served (pic-pic) and then made you a cake (pic) bought you some presents (pic) and they are.... (pic of imaginary presents),

    THEN

    I could say, after dinner Cochin stood up and offered a speech and gifts..... (then you do the story w/the pics-but I could say it differnt)

    cool???
     
  7. hard to understand (STOP TYPING SO FAST [​IMG]) but cool
     
  8. Marty1876

    Marty1876 Hi Everyone!

    Yeah, I screw up more if I'm excited and typing fast, thats true! [​IMG]

    Lets do that then. Go do your surprise (and go erase any references on your posts)

    so when she gets here, we do our usual chit chat and happy birthday stuff, then I'll start. [​IMG]

    We are awesome, oh yeah, rocking awesome, oh yeah.....
     
  9. we gonna post on Boys VS Girls or make a new thread saying


    "Happy B-day Kevin! Your 201 Years old!"
     
  10. Marty1876

    Marty1876 Hi Everyone!

    I make a happy birhtday thread, and signed the first new entry from you and I, so we can either post there, or at boys vs. girls where we all became buds.
     

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