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Twilight got back up, ready for more. "Surrender? This is our herd! Not yours! Your the ones who should leave." To the Gypsy vanners surprise, she jumped in him, and kicked him in the skull, making a sligh, but painful crack, making him near to passing out.

The Fresian hopped out of almost nowhere and jumped into Twilight's side, tumbling with her. Not only did he break the rest of her ribs, but he bit into her neck until huge teeth and blood scars appeared and she too, was near fainted.

Flip tackled him from the side. "Stop, Freezie. Whoa now. You're not killing Jet's mare any day." He stood over him, his teeth gripped in the skin of his throat. He made a tiny incision, enough to cause a trickle of blood, to warn the black horse of what could come.
 
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The Fresian hopped out of almost nowhere and jumped into Twilight's side, tumbling with her. Not only did he break the rest of her ribs, but he bit into her neck until huge teeth and blood scars appeared and she too, was near fainted.

Flip tackled him from the side. "Stop, Freezie. Whoa now. You're not killing Jet's mare any day." He stood over him, his teeth gripped in the skin of his throat. He made a tiny incision, enough to cause a trickle of blood, to warn the black horse of what could come.

He bit Flip back, warning him not to make this ugly.
 
Who are you to fatally injure Zinnia's characters? I mean, that's nearly as bad as killing them. How could a badly hurt horse suddenly revive and be well enough to walk and talk again? I just don't think it's fair.
 
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Flip tackled him from the side. "Stop, Freezie. Whoa now. You're not killing Jet's mare any day." He stood over him, his teeth gripped in the skin of his throat. He made a tiny incision, enough to cause a trickle of blood, to warn the black horse of what could come.

He bit Flip back, warning him not to make this ugly.

Flip lept off of the horse and neighed for silence. Seaspray, Aaron, and Ivy, who had arrived without her foals a moment earlier, joined in the call.
 
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The buckskin Gypsy Vanner appeared from over the hills. "Hey!" he called over the fighting and shouting, "There's a mare that needs help!"
 
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And personally, I was trying to go slightly easier on the instant killing problem. Meaning, I was only here to defend my characters, not have them killed, thus also making me go harder on one's own.
 
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