My New Book - thoughts?

[GirlsHuntToo]

https://acrobat.adobe.com/id/urn:aaid:sc:US:d8f0c226-b52f-4801-b708-c8c0c877b4ad

I've been writing this for the past 4 months, which has been a hit and miss and a lot of error, but I would love everyones thoughts.
It is by no means perfect, and I know there are some grammer mistakes at the moment - and I plan to correct them but note the characters have southern accents and are from the south.
And copywrite with names, I understand - but I wanted y'all to know who it's about if you've heard the name somewhere before.
Thank you for reading
I would everyone who reads thoughts.

 

[ChickQueen77]

It is a pretty good

 

[BigBlueHen53]

I just read the opening chapter and am finding it very engaging. Do you have an editor yet for spelling and stuff? I know I make a lot of typos here but I'm really very good at grammar, spelling snd punctuation.

 

[BigBlueHen53]

I will read thr rest later tonight or tomorrow morning. It's quite good so far!

 

[GirlsHuntToo]

I just read the opening chapter and am finding it very engaging. Do you have an editor yet for spelling and stuff? I know I make a lot of typos here but I'm really very good at grammar, spelling snd punctuation.

Thank you, I’m glad u liked it.
I don’t yet. It’s just something I’ve started in the last few months and I haven’t shared with many people. And I would love the help if that was you offering - if not don’t worry about it. thanks again!

 

[BigBlueHen53]

Thank you, I’m glad u liked it.
I don’t yet. It’s just something I’ve started in the last few months and I haven’t shared with many people. And I would love the help if that was you offering - if not don’t worry about it. thanks again!

I was offering, yes. Not sure of the logistics.