Sounds like a planOohh, this is good. I typically enjoy dialogue, that usually how I pair actions, show feelings- but this is really, really good. Like, she has so many natural, relatable emotions. I literally write so much dialogue, I am rarely writing what my mc is thinking, which might actually be a bad thing, gosh, I think it's just astyle
though. But that's because in previous books, just paragraphs and paragraphs of stupid THINKING has driven me insane. But this- this does not drive me in sane. Kudos to writing readable brrrrain thoughts
Also- we'll sync up times later, right now for Tobias and the others, it's prolly 2pm. For y'all it's, like, the middle of the night or something. We'll sync up times later.
Since there's a big rally tonight in The Den, they'll probably want to show off the LunarWings...And I think they regularly auction off any new dragons before the games- that way we can keep it moving, no one's just sitting around.