_-Captain BRM-_
Post Tenebras Lux.
- Feb 1, 2021
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What's funny is I haven't seen you're writing evolve much over the past half year or so, but I definitely see it in Taber. And that's not a bad thing, either, you just have a style you stick to and prefer, I just say it because it's something I've noticed in the past and I've just been, like, slightly jealous because my writing in previous RPs is cringe worthy, and yours is steadfast to your liddle style yuh got goin on there the whole way through.You guys are both awesome writers, and no one’s criticized my art before, so I don’t know if I write well, or bad, or mediocre.
%100 honesty, what do you guys think of the way I write? Any way I can improve?
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Now. This is a constructive criticism bit, right, right?
So, I'd say you write well, but it is a shade 'immature' in a sense of grammar, maybe? Idk, I'm struggling to pinpoint what I'm seeing. It feels like you're writing for a younger audience, perhaps, but I think that's only due to wordage, and also because we all stepped up, like, five levels the moment Roe hit the floor, so there's that, too.
What your super good at is perspectives. Like, I see Queen Raptor, Cas. Then I see that WebWing Queen and this Raptor. And THEN I see Shrike and your CW mc character, whose name I fail to remember. Like, they all contrast SO. FRIGGIN. HARD. And that's just straight up talent, MJ, because all those characters are so intensely different from each other, and it obviously comes to you quite naturally.
You have SO much potential, pal.