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[HCFarms96]

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I like how you explained everything! Except Glory is a lune and doesn't get into mischief, she rolls her neck instead,

. But you got it! Thats what she thinks when it rains,

No mischief at all? I didn't think that was possible for goats, lol

Ya, I think that's what all goats think when it rains, hehe

 

[Symphony]

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I like how you explained everything! Except Glory is a lune and doesn't get into mischief, she rolls her neck instead,

. But you got it! Thats what she thinks when it rains,

No mischief at all? I didn't think that was possible for goats, lol

Ya, I think that's what all goats think when it rains, hehe

Only around milking time.

 

[HCFarms96]

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No mischief at all? I didn't think that was possible for goats, lol

Ya, I think that's what all goats think when it rains, hehe

Only around milking time.

Ah, I see. Our goats are "bad" all the time

 

[NixNoodleNumbat]

I'm unhappy with my first chapter. Is it really that bad?
I dunno, can I rewrite it?
Also, for the future, what is your property like?

 

[Symphony]

Yours is fine. I'll give you a satalite pic.

 

[Symphony]

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My brother says it is nice, he says the plot is good but he doesn't like "the girl" saying chooks, but your australian so that doesn't matter.

I think you did very well.

 

[Symphony]

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It's on the first page.

 

[Symphony]

Who will write the next one?

 

[HCFarms96]

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I think your chapter is fine

 

[HCFarms96]

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I noticed you don't have chickendiva25, StarLover21, or Kevin565 on the chapter writers list. Maybe you could PM one of them to write the next chapter, they all joined.