~~~~~~Race Horse RPG~~~~~~~

[animallover505]

"What's up?" he asked, turning around.

 

[OnceInALifeTime]

"John! This is Lillian our new trainer. I dont know the horses as well as you do, do mind showing her around?" Jackie said in her soft but firm voice

 

[Perfect Polish]

Juno went toward Frees stall. She was going to work him out today for the upcomin race. She tacked him up and took him out to the track

 

[animallover505]

"Sure, no problem!"

 

[Perfect Polish]

She raced him aroound and finished. she put him up. She saw John and a girl. Hey she called. out.

 

[animallover505]

"Hey!" he called back, waving.

 

[Perfect Polish]

Is she new.I can show her my horses if you want she said.

 

[OnceInALifeTime]

"Great thanks!" Jackie said happily

 

[animallover505]

(Please put quotation marks around what the character says)

"That's up to Jackie"

 

[OnceInALifeTime]

 Is she new.I can show her my horses if you want she said.

(Use quotation marks!)