So...Kid's story, what do you think?

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

Hi, everybody! So... I've been working on a kid's story and before I go further, I'd like your opinions! I'll post one page a week, and I'd love to hear what you honestly think. Here's the cover and first page. Thanks!

 

[sourland]

Go for it.

 

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

Go for it.

Thanks!

 

[cluckmecoop7]

I like it!

 

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

I like it!

Thanks!

 

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

Here is page 2

 

[drumstick diva]

more, more - author - author

 

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

more, more - author - author

Thanks!

 

[cluckmecoop7]

Love it! Keep up the great work!

 

[FeatheredFriends&Horses2]

Love it! Keep up the great work!

Thank you!