(It looks great. I made one, too. I'll post it in a sec., then we can decide which one is better.)
(LOL Its your RP, you can choose

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(It looks great. I made one, too. I'll post it in a sec., then we can decide which one is better.)
Layla danced out of the way, but not quick enough, and a small gash on her shoulder. She snarled angrily, "Give up Jargo." Layla froze, and lowered her head threateningly.
Layla looked at Scar, and almost collapsed on the ground. She sat down, and panted hard. Melanie wobbled over, and whimpered putting her head on her chest. Layla looked down at the pup, and suddenly felt extremely protective. She got up, and snarled loudly at Jargo.Scar let out a roar and stepped protectively in front of Layla facing Jargo "Stop and think about this for a moment" He growled
Well, I best be on my way I guess...
Well, I best be on my way I guess...
"I umm" Yuki said falling down again
(My map turned out poorly, so I slightly edited a copy of yours---I hope you don't mind.)![]()