The Journey (a story i wrote)

[SilkiesForEver]

I want chap. 3!!!!!

Thanks for the compliment. I have to say though, that my story isn't as good as most out there.

Looking forward to chapter 3!!! (Oh and BTW: look at the poll at the top. Lots of people like it.

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[millfleur4ever]

Thanks. Does any one know of some good stories on BYC?

 

[millfleur4ever]

Well bantamsRbest is this better or is it still like silkies story? (no offence)

 

[millfleur4ever]

One more person post you like it and I'll write chap three

 

[millfleur4ever]

One more person post you like it and I'll write chap three

 

[wildriverswolf90]

I like it

 

[millfleur4ever]

The perfect herd

It had been a few months now since Ella had been abandoned and just as she thought she was getting the hang of things out here in the wild the most amazing thing happened.

It was a cool day and Ella decided to take a little run. She set off cantering at full speed until she came to the edge of a cliff. She stopped abruptly and looked over the edge. She saw the most beautiful sight she had ever laid eyes on. It was a herd of horses. The younger fillys and foals frolicked in a meadow peppered with pink and yellow flowers. The elder horses of the herd stood off to the side and discussed where the herd will travel for the winter since the weather was getting colder. The mares talked in a circle once in a while looking at their filly or foal the lead stallion stood majestically above all on a high rock looking down upon his herd. It was the perfect image of what a herd should look like.

I have to get down there thought Ella. She searched and searched for a way down. She bent over once again to admire the "perfect herd" as she did her hoof slipped off a slimy moss covered rock making her whole body wobble she tumbled over head first down the mountain side. Bumping her body against rocks and getting slapped with the branches of trees. When she arrived at the bottom she was covered from head to toe with bruises and cuts and scrapes and she was so frightened.

The whole herd came running over to her asking her questions and staring at her. The lead mare exclaimed everyone move back give her some space. Carmel started to ask a question and the mare said shhh filly you will stay here until you can mke your own choices but you are welcome to stay here she smiled.

 

[millfleur4ever]

How do you like it?

 

[wildriverswolf90]

I think its great

 

[WooingWyandotte]

I like it.