The Last Wolves RP

[Wintent]

Hougen smiled "You know I love you right?' he asked her.
The brown dog then growled and stood up, he was now bleeding "I will make you sorry" he said then bit into Harvey and threw him into the tree again, then ran over and bit into his neck and held him down.

Wolf and Kiar then walk over and bit into the huge dog and got him off of Harvey and held him down.

Dalton and Soren walked over. Soren bit the Huge dog's right eye and then pulled away. The huge dog then yelped, and tried to stand.


The gray dog laughed "Daddy's girl" he chuckled.

"Yeah," Winter said with a smile,"You know I love you right?"

 

[troy4]

Samantha I say slowly

 

[moriah6299]

"Yeah," Winter said with a smile,"You know I love you right?"

Hougen nodded "Yes I know that" he said as he licked her cheek.

Samantha I say slowly

(Umm ok I'm going to help. First off. I don't even know what you wrote. we use Third-person writing.

Ex. Ki went for a walk, he then saw something.

So could you use Thrid-person or if you don't want to then ok. but try and make the first-person readable)

Samantha nodded and walked over to see what Millicent was doing.

Mitzi looked up at Millicent and frowned, being a close friend she could tell when something was very wrong.

Millicent stared at the ground for a moment then looked at Soren and Harvey, "Its Misty... She had BloodRage (Rabies)," she whimpered sadly. "Mom had to kill her before she killed any of us,"

Harvey's eyes widen and his mouth dropped open, "W-what?" he said quietly. His tail had actually stopped wagging for once.

Soren's heart dropped when he heard that "M-Misty's..........g-gone?" he asked "No.....it can't be" he had finally broken down, he was in tears and he didn't even care that he was showing it.

Tiny felt her heart dropped 'I'm so sorry for your lose. My brother Nate and his mate knew what they had to do for poor Misty" she said



Lucinda, Collin and Dalton all howled mournfully.

 

[Wintent]

Hougen nodded "Yes I know that" he said as he licked her cheek.
(Umm ok I'm going to help. First off. I don't even know what you wrote. we use Third-person writing.

Ex. Ki went for a walk, he then saw something.

So could you use Thrid-person or if you don't want to then ok. but try and make the first-person readable)
Soren's heart dropped when he heard that "M-Misty's..........g-gone?" he asked "No.....it can't be" he had finally broken down, he was in tears and he didn't even care that he was showing it.

Tiny felt her heart dropped 'I'm so sorry for your lose. My brother Nate and his mate knew what they had to do for poor Misty" she said



Lucinda, Collin and Dalton all howled mournfully.

Winter nuzzled him.

 

[OrpieLover31]

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Harvey threw his head back and started to howl. He wasn't howling for fun or anything like that, instead he was howling over the lost of his own sister. But soon his mournful howls broke into sobs, his eyes glimmered with grief. He actually started to grow very noticeable tears in his eyes.

Millicent nodded slowly and started to mourn over her loss.

 

[moriah6299]

Winter nuzzled him.

Hougen felt something very deep, he then nuzzled her more.

Phoebe sighed sadly and stared at the ground. How did she get it? Its extremely rare for our kind to get Rabies.. She said under her breath.

Harvey threw his head back and started to howl. He wasn't howling for fun or anything like that, instead he was howling over the lost of his own sister. But soon his mournful howls broke into sobs, his eyes glimmered with grief. He actually started to grow very noticeable tears in his eyes.

Millicent nodded slowly and started to mourn over her loss.

Wolf continued to walk, he remember what Nate had told him a few days ago (Flashback) Nate came walking over to Wolf "Hey Wolf I need to ask you something" he said. Wolf smiled "what is it Nate?' he asked. Nate sighed "Well it's Misty she's been acting strange and I don't know what it is" he said. Wolf thought "Well what has she been showing?" he asked. Nate sighed "A lot more aggressive, a little crazy and more thirst for blood I guess" he said. Wolf sighed "You need to put her down. She has Blood Rage or other called Rabies" he said. Nate was shocked 'No.... not that, it must be something else please Wolf tell me it isn't" he begged. Wolf sighed "I'm sorry but it is" he said. Nate shook his head 'No!! it can't be I'll wait and see" he said then stormed off."

Wolf sighed I'm sorry Nate he thought


Tiny sighed "Yes, let you howls be heard by the past wolves and Misty. She will be very much missed" she said.

Soren was still crying, he had never broken down like this.

Lucinda, Dalton and Collin all howled for the lose of Misty.

 

[OrpieLover31]

Quote: Phoebe walked back and flopped herself under a tree by herself. She felt terrible for Nate and Grace, especially if they had to kill her. Grace was no where to be seen, which made her wonder if there was something wrong with her also.

Harvey then darted off, he didn't want the others see him like this.

Millicent sighed sadly then watched her brother leave, "I'm sorry," she whispered.

 

[moriah6299]

Phoebe walked back and flopped herself under a tree by herself. She felt terrible for Nate and Grace, especially if they had to kill her. Grace was no where to be seen, which made her wonder if there was something wrong with her also.

Harvey then darted off, he didn't want the others see him like this.

Millicent sighed sadly then watched her brother leave, "I'm sorry," she whispered.

Wolf looked at Phoebe and sighed. Kiar stopped, she laid down and sighed, she knew the pain of losing someone that someone loved.

Nate was back at camp, he didn't want anyone to see him right now I'm a terrible father. I'm sorry Misty He thought.


Soren watched Harvey leaving, then he stood up and went to other way.

Tiny watched them "Let them be, their both sad to lose their sister, especial Soren" she said "But her time was up on this planet, but her brothers and sister still are alive, that is good" she said

Lucinda, Dalton and Collin stopped howling and nodded

 

[OrpieLover31]

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Phoebe rested her head on her paws and glanced around. She knew how it felt to lose one, and she knew that it was going to take some time to get over their loss.

Millicent nodded slowly and looked at Mitzi, who looked quite startled by what happened. "Should we all be concerned about this? Will it spread?" Mitzi asked worriedly.

Harvey finally stopped at a lake and looked around.

 

[moriah6299]

Phoebe rested her head on her paws and glanced around. She knew how it felt to lose one, and she knew that it was going to take some time to get over their loss.

Millicent nodded slowly and looked at Mitzi, who looked quite startled by what happened. "Should we all be concerned about this? Will it spread?" Mitzi asked worriedly.

Harvey finally stopped at a lake and looked around.

Wolf sighed then paced.

Kiar watched him and then put her head on her paws.


Tiny thought "Millicent, Misty didn't bit anyone or anything did she?" she asked.

Soren stopped by a huge tree, he sat there and whimpered.

Dalton and Collin sat there listening.

Lucinda knew what Tiny was doing.