~The New Kind of Cops Part Two~An Action Packed, Crime Fighting RP!!

Lillian began to come to. She saw the blurry outline of Richard. "What happened?" She mumbled

"You fainted." Again, Richard replied bluntly. This time, however, he was smiling softly.

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Buck felt his hair, it was dried off and messy. He got up to get his comb.

Abby grabbed Buck by the waist and laughed. "I like your messy hair, don't even think about brushing it."
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Tobias woke up, and waited for Kiki to get up.

Kiki woke up and smiled at Tobias.
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(Is anyone there)

(Yeah)
 
"You fainted." Again, Richard replied bluntly. This time, however, he was smiling softly.

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Abby grabbed Buck by the waist and laughed. "I like your messy hair, don't even think about brushing it."
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Kiki woke up and smiled at Tobias.
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(Yeah)
Tobias smiled. "Morning, babe.''
 
"You fainted." Again, Richard replied bluntly. This time, however, he was smiling softly.

(New writing style? Yay or nay?)
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Abby grabbed Buck by the waist and laughed. "I like your messy hair, don't even think about brushing it."
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Kiki woke up and smiled at Tobias.
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(Yeah)

Buck smiled and laughed," Very well then" he said, turning around.
 
"God what is the matter with you??" Danny yelled.

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"I honestly have no idea." Brody chuckled.

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"You're my brother...." Danny said.

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"I'm not your brother." He said as he punched Danny in the jaw.

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Danny spat out some blood, and wiped his face. "Are you for real here???" Danny said. "Cause my hearts killing." He put his fist at his chest.
"Yeah, im for real.'' Brody said.

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Danny sighed. "Are you going to kill me or what?''

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"i want to take my time....'' He said.
 
(New writing style as in the commas? I like commas. You can add a whole lot more info with them. :) )

"Oh", Lillian replied. Richard came into focus. She noticed she was on the floor in his office. She felt her head for a bump, then asked, "Did I fall on the floor, or what?"
 
(New writing style as in the commas? I like commas. You can add a whole lot more info with them. :) )

"Oh", Lillian replied. Richard came into focus. She noticed she was on the floor in his office. She felt her head for a bump, then asked, "Did I fall on the floor, or what?"

(No, the description of things. But, yes, I love commas. XD)

Richard chuckled. "I caught you, before too much harm was caused. I have no idea why you fainted, but I'm glad you're okay. I was getting worried." He had given up on being blunt, for now anyways.
 

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