(Can you guys put comments in parentheses? It's easier to skip past those parts when speedreading 20 pages because you were at school.)
Sir. Crusty glared at Queen Daisy and Wesley. This was the kind of chicken he bullied in the streets, or at least, the urchins were. As king, this rooster would support these urchins, and Sir. Crusty's own significance would be lost.
"Queen Daisy, as much as you wish the best upon your daughter, don't you think breaking a many centuries tradition is uncouth? Dragging an urchin into the throne is betrayal of your very blood! They will lose their respect for you. Take me, none shall go against you." Sir Crusty's red eyes flickered, but he kept his emotions in check. "Mark my words, feudal times are coming, and it will be peasants like him against us..."
(Wow, she's old)Butterscotch smiled a sad smile, “ But you don’t end up starving for half your life and at the drop of a hat could be murdered, remember I am a 15 year old in a world full of murderers and you your protected” Butterscotch said
Sir. Crusty glared at Queen Daisy and Wesley. This was the kind of chicken he bullied in the streets, or at least, the urchins were. As king, this rooster would support these urchins, and Sir. Crusty's own significance would be lost.
"Queen Daisy, as much as you wish the best upon your daughter, don't you think breaking a many centuries tradition is uncouth? Dragging an urchin into the throne is betrayal of your very blood! They will lose their respect for you. Take me, none shall go against you." Sir Crusty's red eyes flickered, but he kept his emotions in check. "Mark my words, feudal times are coming, and it will be peasants like him against us..."