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  • I have a dying RP. (Or two. Or a billion...)

    Votes: 12 38.7%

  • My new RP isn't successful.

    Votes: 14 45.2%

  • I need some advice.

    Votes: 12 38.7%

  • I just wanna talk RPs!

    Votes: 16 51.6%
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ok i have the plot!



The phoenix hatchling stared into space, stunned by what had just happened. The Wingblades, a band of scruffy loners who thought they could rule the land of Phoenicia attacked the hatchery and killed all the phoenixes who were tending the eggs. That same phoenix decided at that moment he would defeat that loner who made this massacre , he would kill the Wingblades.
 
WildWyandott110 said:
ok i have the plot!



[COLOR=333333]The phoenix hatchling stared into space, stunned by what had just happened. The Wingblades, a band of scruffy loners who thought they could rule the land of Phoenicia attacked the hatchery and killed all the phoenixes who were tending the eggs. That same phoenix decided at that moment he would defeat that loner who made this massacre , he would kill the Wingblades.[/COLOR]
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The plot is good, but you might wanna change the font bigger size, and use a different color, that stuff always helps to make an rp look nicer
 
WildWyandott110 said:
ok i have the plot!



The phoenix hatchling stared into space, stunned by what had just happened. The Wingblades, a band of scruffy loners who thought they could rule the land of Phoenicia attacked the hatchery and killed all the phoenixes who were tending the eggs. That same phoenix decided at that moment he would defeat that loner who made this massacre , he would kill the Wingblades. He's just a hatchling? He probably can't promise this stuff. A baby can't plot revenge. He could simply be young though.
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The ChickenKing said:
The plot is good, but you might wanna change the font bigger size, and use a different color, that stuff always helps to make an rp look nicer
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Meaning: Add STYLE!
 
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