What do you think of our Pet Sitting cards?

[ChooksinChoppers]

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I am on the same page as Wendy.....dont hit the print button just yet

 

[BookWorm243]

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I am on the same page as Wendy.....dont hit the print button just yet

Anyone else have thoughts on this? Would love to hear more opinions.

 

[Laurajean]

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I am on the same page as Wendy.....dont hit the print button just yet

Anyone else have thoughts on this? Would love to hear more opinions.

I was thinking it could be tweeked, but didn't mention it because I was more concerned about your low prices. But yeah, you could alter it slightly like "A friend for your best friend", or "Loving Care for Your Best Friend"... "quality care for your best friend..." It's really the pet that is their best friend, ya know? Something like that. I did think the original line was a little awkward, but not bad either. I would just play around with the words and post some variations here.

 

[ChooksinChoppers]

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Anyone else have thoughts on this? Would love to hear more opinions.

I was thinking it could be tweeked, but didn't mention it because I was more concerned about your low prices. But yeah, you could alter it slightly like "A friend for your best friend", or "Loving Care for Your Best Friend"... "quality care for your best friend..." It's really the pet that is their best friend, ya know? Something like that. I did think the original line was a little awkward, but not bad either. I would just play around with the words and post some variations here.

Good choices Laurajean! you are good at this!

 

[ChicksterJo]

Agree with Laurajean and others on that one - that 'motto' is a little awkward (that's what my old English teacher used to say and I used to hate that word from then on

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I like "A friend for your best friend." Has a nice ring.

 

[BookWorm243]

Well since we are changing our 'motto'

should we change our name? As I said we are just starting out so most of anything can change. 'All About You Pet Sitting' is focused on the owner not the pet. Should we just cut out the 'You' and just make it 'All About Pet Sitting" or is that to choppy sounding?

 

[ChicksterJo]

If it's possible then you should cut out the 'you' and just leave it as "All About Pet Sitting." Give us some more suggestions - this is fun

 

[BookWorm243]

I think we are going to stick with 'All About Pet Sitting' but know for the Motto

All About Pet Sitting
People trust us, pets love us


or how about


All About Pet Sitting
Where your pet can come, play and stay



Still working on it, more to come

 

[BookWorm243]

our website is allaboutyoupetsitting.webs.com and we can't change it. So if we change our name it won't match our website, crap

 

[ChicksterJo]

I was worried about that, too. That's a toughie. I don't have much experience with making websites so can't help you there. Sorry!
I love that motto though, "People trust us, pets love us."