KikiLeigh02
Free Ranging
Yikes. I am super glad you edited that one! Not much offends me, but to call out a specific member that hasn't posted in your thread and isn't around to defend their position is just really poor taste.
I hate editing. For some unknown reason once I start tinkering with a paragraph it doesn’t flow the way it did.
The stories about the chickens here, the core of the book, need to emotionally engage the reader. Some seem to work better than others, but I don’t know what the key is.![]()
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