Outlaw snorted, resuming to drink from the river. His stance clearly said, Mess with me or my mate and you die
(isn't Outlaw 2-years or is he older?)
Zachorzy felt a smile creeping across his muzzle. Did the colt actually think he wanted Dezi? Zachorzy was trying to get rid of Dezi.
(2)
What kind of mother ditches her foal for some stranger she doesn't even hardly know? Outlaw thought angrily. Not a very loving one, that's for sure.
Dezi sighed. "I wish she wasn't leaving me." She said.