i LOVE the second one! hmm, i see your point, but it would maybe be more epic if you had a battle with Bloodpack. I mean, bloodpack is VISCIOUS! maybe your healer smells the traces of bloodpack and alerts the pack? a war with bloodpack could end up being veery interesting! (yes. Stormpack won the battle, and one of the alpha rules is that if one of the alphas dies, the remaining one must pick a new mate by sunset on the same day. oh yeah and Stormdancer died and came back to life. you didn't miss anything much, really
) soon, Persephone's hole was deep enough towhere she could reach the pup at the bottom, but he couldn't climb out. she dragged him by a paw to the hole opening, then dropped him in. before she left him, she paused and gave him an evil smile. then, she turned tail and walked away.