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[CHICKEN CRAZY1]

silvermis caught the scent of rac. she stopped nd crawled toward him, silently.

Rac,being an excellent spy, knew she was there. He ignored her seing what she would do

 

[Aaisha]

Quote: she leapt at her, dogding her attack. she bit and sank her fangs deep into her neck, till it reachthe spine. she kep on holding her.

Sasha jumped to the side, and stood on her two hind paws. She crashed Silvermist into the tree behind her over and over again.
eachtime silvermist dodging her attacks. she came at the front and sprang at her clawing her eyes. oneclaw went straigth into sasha's right eye.

Before it his her eye, Sasha ducked her head and rammed the top of her head hard into Silvermist's chest.
before that, silvermist leaped away nd bit her in the chest, straight at the heart. she sank her angs in. (every 1of 5 attack can be doged, sasha cant escape every attack. now she cant escape this noe, she has done more then 1/5 doges.)

(Silvermist has done a lot of dodges. Just sayin'.)

Sasha knew she couldn't escape. She lay, looking at Silvermist, hatred in her eyes. She leaned up, and bit into her neck.
silvermist bit into her neck. (cause im admin. my wolfs of shadowclan can doge more, but ony mine and shadow clan wolfs of mine) silvermist grinned eviley. she knew she cold win.

Fury boiled up inside of Sasha. The wild beast within her arose. With one extremely powerful push of her hind legs, she sent Silvemist flying. Her eyes were burning with flames. You did NOT want to mess with her now, or you would lose.

(Not saying that you're wrong or anything, but I think that you should still have a limit to how many dodges your wolves have. Just my personal opinion.)
(i changed the rule. al wolf can only dogde 1 out of 5 attacks.)

silvermist rolled up, and leapt at sahsa, sinking her fangs deep in her chest.

 

[Aaisha]

Quote: silvermist crouched low. if he did no hharm, she shouldnt attack him, knowing that she would loose.

 

[CHICKEN CRAZY1]

silvermist crouched low. if he did no hharm, she shouldnt attack him, knowing that she would loose.

Rac gave her a warning growl,telling her he knew she was there and had better not do anything...lest she suffer the consequences. Rac continued to dog trot most of the way back to camp.

 

[Aaisha]

silvermist watche him go an then laughed. she go up and walked, ooking for food

 

[CHICKEN CRAZY1]

silvermist watche him go an then laughed. she go up and walked, ooking for food

Rac double back and crept up on Silver mist. He leaped on her and grabbed her scruff and demanded in a rough voice. "Tell me what's happening in your clan! Now!''

 

[Aaisha]

she leaped and bit his neck. "never," she growled. "go away or i will kill you," she said, anger burning in her. she ws from shadowclan! how dare thiis wolf attacking me?! she thought

 

[CHICKEN CRAZY1]

she leaped and bit his neck. "never," she growled. "go away or i will kill you," she said, anger burning in her. she ws from shadowclan! how dare thiis wolf attacking me?! she thought

Rac growled in anger. The bite scored a direct hit. He jumped in the middle of her and went for the throat.

 

[Aaisha]

she dodged, quickly. she went and bit his throught quickly, before he could take action.

 

[CHICKEN CRAZY1]

she dodged, quickly. she went and bit his throught quickly, before he could take action.

Rac ducked and quickly lifted his head to hit her in the chin. He growled and said in a deep soothing voice. "Nice moves. I must say you are fantastically built." Rac smiled, a sly one. he was getting to like her.