Raising House Baby Chicks In INDIA Ultimate Guide To Raise Healthy Pet House Chooks With Immunity

Clearly and explicitly directed towards the apparently significant and growing community of BYC readers in India, this article contains a lot of information for anyone else anywhere who wants to avoid commercial feed because, we're told, it doesn't exist in India for domestic keepers, so they have to feed what's available. This involves a mix of eggs, bread (which exists in huge variety of course), rice and millet, for example, a number of common herbs, and some prepared tonics.

Good job! Some of the grammatical errors were hard to understand (but I also know you aren’t from the U.S)
I also am not a big believer in natural remedies (but that’s a personal preference)

It's hard to read with so many punctuation errors.

Good job