Feels rather unfocused which leads to insufficient detail despite the (impressive) article length. However, your formatting is splendid, easy to read, and even has photo credits!
Casportpony already mentioned a few concerns about the accuracy of some of the information so I won’t repeat them. Overall nice work and with some tweaks - maybe even turning it into a multi-page article if you want to keep the scope - it could be even better.
Casportpony already mentioned a few concerns about the accuracy of some of the information so I won’t repeat them. Overall nice work and with some tweaks - maybe even turning it into a multi-page article if you want to keep the scope - it could be even better.