It looks like this chicken's eye issues are likely the result of a respiratory disease, such as coryza or MG. It would be good to put in a small blurb about the importance of treating the underlying cause as well as the eye issues, just so an owner with a chicken like this doesn't just keep cleaning the eyes and think that will solve the problem fully.
Other than that, it's a well-written article with good visuals and treatment plan.
