~•-SeaBand - A RP of the Chincoteague Pony Band-•~ FINALLY a new plot!

[equinehugger3]

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Jackal nuzzled her "kotori" he mumbled in a worried tone

She lifted her head, and, with much effort, nickered from low in her throat to Jackal. "Jackal..." She forced the word from her mouth before letting her heavy head go limp once again. It hit the ground with a dull thud.


BTW - For people with new forms: I'm on my iPod, so I don't feel like scrolling down a billion paragraphs of BBcode and stuff to post the forms on here. I'll post them next time I get on the laptop, promise.

 

[DuckLover2399]

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Jackal nuzzled her "kotori" he mumbled in a worried tone

She lifted her head, and, with much effort, nickered from low in her throat to Jackal. "Jackal..." She forced the word from her mouth before letting her heavy head go limp once again. It hit the ground with a dull thud.


BTW - For people with new forms: I'm on my iPod, so I don't feel like scrolling down a billion paragraphs of BBcode and stuff to post the forms on here. I'll post them next time I get on the laptop, promise.

Perfectly fine eh3!

"shhh" he cooned nuzzleing her "lilah you need to hurry" he thought to himself

 

[equinehugger3]

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She lifted her head, and, with much effort, nickered from low in her throat to Jackal. "Jackal..." She forced the word from her mouth before letting her heavy head go limp once again. It hit the ground with a dull thud.


BTW - For people with new forms: I'm on my iPod, so I don't feel like scrolling down a billion paragraphs of BBcode and stuff to post the forms on here. I'll post them next time I get on the laptop, promise.

Perfectly fine eh3!

"shhh" he cooned nuzzleing her "lilah you need to hurry" he thought to himself

Fuco came into view, straining his legs to go faster. Little Lilah struggled to keep up with her grandsire, her tiny fuzzy foal tail whipping around in the wind.

 

[DuckLover2399]

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Perfectly fine eh3!

"shhh" he cooned nuzzleing her "lilah you need to hurry" he thought to himself

Fuco came into view, straining his legs to go faster. Little Lilah struggled to keep up with her grandsire, her tiny fuzzy foal tail whipping around in the wind.

Jackal pircked his ears "fuco!" he called "over here"

 

[equinehugger3]

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Fuco came into view, straining his legs to go faster. Little Lilah struggled to keep up with her grandsire, her tiny fuzzy foal tail whipping around in the wind.

Jackal pircked his ears "fuco!" he called "over here"

Fuco turned sharply and headed in their direction. His hooves tore through the ground, sending pieces of earth flying. He skidded to a halt about ten yards away before trotting up to her. "Oh, gosh, those jerk stallions," He muttered before picking some delicate flowers gently with his teeth. He began to chew them and rinse them with saltwater until they'd formed a pasty salve. He used his muzzle to rub it into all of the wounds she'd collected, focusing on her mane, which was still almost non-existent.

 

[DuckLover2399]

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Jackal pircked his ears "fuco!" he called "over here"

Fuco turned sharply and headed in their direction. His hooves tore through the ground, sending pieces of earth flying. He skidded to a halt about ten yards away before trotting up to her. "Oh, gosh, those jerk stallions," He muttered before picking some delicate flowers gently with his teeth. He began to chew them and rinse them with saltwater until they'd formed a pasty salve. He used his muzzle to rub it into all of the wounds she'd collected, focusing on her mane, which was still almost non-existent.

Jackal stayed beside kotori "fuco.. It wasn't the stallions"

 

[equinehugger3]

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Fuco turned sharply and headed in their direction. His hooves tore through the ground, sending pieces of earth flying. He skidded to a halt about ten yards away before trotting up to her. "Oh, gosh, those jerk stallions," He muttered before picking some delicate flowers gently with his teeth. He began to chew them and rinse them with saltwater until they'd formed a pasty salve. He used his muzzle to rub it into all of the wounds she'd collected, focusing on her mane, which was still almost non-existent.

Jackal stayed beside kotori "fuco.. It wasn't the stallions"

(Tse pulled her mane out and beat her.)

Fuco paused momentarily to look at Jackal questioningly. "Then, who? Or what?"

 

[DuckLover2399]

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Jackal stayed beside kotori "fuco.. It wasn't the stallions"

(Tse pulled her mane out and beat her.)

Fuco paused momentarily to look at Jackal questioningly. "Then, who? Or what?"

(no I thought it was that mare? Remember that tried to get jackal to like her, the Arabian?)

"It was a mare"

 

[equinehugger3]

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(Tse pulled her mane out and beat her.)

Fuco paused momentarily to look at Jackal questioningly. "Then, who? Or what?"

(no I thought it was that mare? Remember that tried to get jackal to like her, the Arabian?)

"It was a mare"

(Oh, yeah! After her, Tse nearly killed her, too. Musta been a rough day.

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"Oh, yes..." He murmured, continuing to treat her. "And... And a s-stallion," Kotori croaked, and attempted to motion to her missing mane. She cringed in pain at the attempt.


Auto-correct is such a jerk.

 

[DuckLover2399]

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(no I thought it was that mare? Remember that tried to get jackal to like her, the Arabian?)

"It was a mare"

(Oh, yeah! After her, Tse nearly killed her, too. Musta been a rough day.

)
"Oh, yes..." He murmured, continuing to treat her. "And... And a s-stallion," Kotori croaked, and attempted to motion to her missing mane. She cringed in pain at the attempt.


Auto-correct is such a jerk.

It is!

"no no no stay still" he said

(yea rough day)