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[miss heny]

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okay..

the creepy one

https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/uploads/48043_dsci0505.jpg

the pretty one

https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/uploads/48043_dsci0504.jpg

Those are cool MH! Mind if I give some constructive criticism?

sure

 

[chickendiva25]

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Those are cool MH! Mind if I give some constructive criticism?

sure

Cool.

And, sorry if something comes out wrong, I have a veeeery bad habit of being rude when I don't mean to be.

Anyways, on the first picture, I like what you did with the fire.

But, instead of some of the flames being rounded at the top, it would look more realistic, in a sense, if they were pointy-er. (Sp?

)

The face looks pretty good, except try to make the chin have more of a point at the end. The jaw can be more squared, if that is what you are going for, but the chin should be pointed more.

Neck looks good!

On the shoulders, you definatly have the shape and such down. But, instead of straight, have them curve just a wee bit near the mid-shoulder. Also, try not to have them jut out so far, perhaps bring them in a little bit. Other than that, the shoulders look great!

On the waist, the stomach, or mid-torso, should be longer. Unless, her pants are supposed to come up above her hips....

Definatly got the shape of the hips down, they could be a bit rounder.

Now, the legs, they could use some work.

Instead of making a single line in-between the legs, make a small space. Such as the small space in between the legs in this pic:

And the jeans shouldn't be so wide, here's a tip: Instead of making the pants legs grow larger from the waist down, make them curve in slightly. I don't have an example to show you, as I don't draw full humans that often, but I'll try and make one some other time.

Okay, that is all on the first picture. Now for the second one, which BTW is very pretty!

The face looks really Good MH, you pointer her chin and everything! I'm so proud of you!

Her neck could be a little bit longer, but other-wise looks fine.

The shoulders are a bit too broad, but shaped really good.

Arms, eh, they could be a little bit longer, but look good. The sleeves probably could be smaller and not so wide.

Umm, yeah, that's it! Sorry, its alot, but I really do love your pictures!

The second one is cool.

 

[miss heny]

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sure

Cool.

And, sorry if something comes out wrong, I have a veeeery bad habit of being rude when I don't mean to be.

Anyways, on the first picture, I like what you did with the fire.

But, instead of some of the flames being rounded at the top, it would look more realistic, in a sense, if they were pointy-er. (Sp?

)

The face looks pretty good, except try to make the chin have more of a point at the end. The jaw can be more squared, if that is what you are going for, but the chin should be pointed more.

Neck looks good!

On the shoulders, you definatly have the shape and such down. But, instead of straight, have them curve just a wee bit near the mid-shoulder. Also, try not to have them jut out so far, perhaps bring them in a little bit. Other than that, the shoulders look great!

On the waist, the stomach, or mid-torso, should be longer. Unless, her pants are supposed to come up above her hips....

Definatly got the shape of the hips down, they could be a bit rounder.

Now, the legs, they could use some work.

Instead of making a single line in-between the legs, make a small space. Such as the small space in between the legs in this pic:
https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/uploads/65682_fairy_lesson.jpg
And the jeans shouldn't be so wide, here's a tip: Instead of making the pants legs grow larger from the waist down, make them curve in slightly. I don't have an example to show you, as I don't draw full humans that often, but I'll try and make one some other time.

Okay, that is all on the first picture. Now for the second one, which BTW is very pretty!

The face looks really Good MH, you pointer her chin and everything! I'm so proud of you!

Her neck could be a little bit longer, but other-wise looks fine.

The shoulders are a bit too broad, but shaped really good.

Arms, eh, they could be a little bit longer, but look good. The sleeves probably could be smaller and not so wide.

Umm, yeah, that's it! Sorry, its alot, but I really do love your pictures!

The second one is cool.

i tried to make the pants have a small space, but it did not look right

thank! i like the the dress style XD

 

[chickendiva25]

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Cool.

And, sorry if something comes out wrong, I have a veeeery bad habit of being rude when I don't mean to be.

Anyways, on the first picture, I like what you did with the fire.

But, instead of some of the flames being rounded at the top, it would look more realistic, in a sense, if they were pointy-er. (Sp?

)

The face looks pretty good, except try to make the chin have more of a point at the end. The jaw can be more squared, if that is what you are going for, but the chin should be pointed more.

Neck looks good!

On the shoulders, you definatly have the shape and such down. But, instead of straight, have them curve just a wee bit near the mid-shoulder. Also, try not to have them jut out so far, perhaps bring them in a little bit. Other than that, the shoulders look great!

On the waist, the stomach, or mid-torso, should be longer. Unless, her pants are supposed to come up above her hips....

Definatly got the shape of the hips down, they could be a bit rounder.

Now, the legs, they could use some work.

Instead of making a single line in-between the legs, make a small space. Such as the small space in between the legs in this pic:
https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/uploads/65682_fairy_lesson.jpg
And the jeans shouldn't be so wide, here's a tip: Instead of making the pants legs grow larger from the waist down, make them curve in slightly. I don't have an example to show you, as I don't draw full humans that often, but I'll try and make one some other time.

Okay, that is all on the first picture. Now for the second one, which BTW is very pretty!

The face looks really Good MH, you pointer her chin and everything! I'm so proud of you!

Her neck could be a little bit longer, but other-wise looks fine.

The shoulders are a bit too broad, but shaped really good.

Arms, eh, they could be a little bit longer, but look good. The sleeves probably could be smaller and not so wide.

Umm, yeah, that's it! Sorry, its alot, but I really do love your pictures!

The second one is cool.

i tried to make the pants have a small space, but it did not look right

thank! i like the the dress style XD

Ah, well, it takes time and practice! Believe me, half the reason I hate drawing full human bodies is because of the legs.

 

[miss heny]

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i tried to make the pants have a small space, but it did not look right

thank! i like the the dress style XD

Ah, well, it takes time and practice! Believe me, half the reason I hate drawing full human bodies is because of the legs.

XD i like doing full humans

i just do XD and horses!

 

[chickendiva25]

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Ah, well, it takes time and practice! Believe me, half the reason I hate drawing full human bodies is because of the legs.

XD i like doing full humans

i just do XD and horses!

Horse are fun.

 

[miss heny]

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XD i like doing full humans

i just do XD and horses!

Horse are fun.

i have a new horse drawing...................

 

[chickendiva25]

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Horse are fun.

i have a new horse drawing...................

Can I see it?

 

[miss heny]

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i have a new horse drawing...................

Can I see it?

i need to take a pic of it, it is not that good

 

[chickendiva25]

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Can I see it?

i need to take a pic of it, it is not that good

Ah, I know how that is.

I feel like that about quite a few of my pictures...