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Fanci Feathers Marans said:
Meet the Timezones:
We meet at this time from now on.
Eastern- 7:00 to 9:00
Central- 6:00 to 8:00
Mountain- 5:00 to 7:00
Pacific- 4:00 to 6:00
And this is in the evening, folks.

Meet the Days of the Week:
Wednesday, Thursday, Saturday, Sunday.... I think.

Meet the Squad:
https://www.backyardchickens.com/articles/«we-could-be-heroes»-char-page.73307/

Join The Role Play:
https://www.backyardchickens.com/threads/«we-could-be-heroes».1206571/

Meet *Most* of the Writers:
@CP Chicken
@MissNutmeg
@FrankieDoodle
@RoostersAreAwesome
@vachick15
@Otterkit
@PeepersMama
@MysticChickens04
@Thing2LovesChickens
@Nariah01
@MillersFarm
@Cluckcluck1215
@HeavensHens88
@AMERAUCANAS4REAL
@RiverStorm
@Laodicia
@Flufferes
@CHlCK3N
@ChickenCowboy02
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(can you edit this to have a link to the website story? Purty please)
 
first part in scene 7:
Crow bobbed his head, "Caw." He was still in crow form, so he wasn't worried about getting caught. As for the others....

Gage nodded. "Maybe we should just send Crow-" But then he noticed the ambulance. Someone pushed a stretcher, and it covered a body too small to be one of the thugs. As they loaded it into the truck, he caught a glimpse of a shoe. A small cowboy boot.

Crow stared at Gage, waiting for him to finish. Then he realized that he was looking at something. He followed his gaze and saw the boot. Slowly, his brain connected the dots. Oh....

Gage couldn't breathe. Tor. It couldn't be. His throat burned. Not her. Oh, please don't let it be her! He fell to his knees in the filth. Her truck... they had taken her truck. How could they have forgotten her? His body felt weak, and his hand quivered as he raised it to his face.

second part in scene 8: Gage let the cop bind his wings ** didn't cuff him because all following scenes gage's hands are free** as he sat there, shaking his head. How could this have happened? It had all started out so innocent, so good, and yet here they were. Himself, Farren, and Finely, all in chains. And Tor... oh, Tor. His heart hurt to think about her. His face heated up, but there were no tears left. Never would he forgive himself. Never. They took Gage out to the car and shoved him in. There was a mild stench of vomit in the car. He slid in,, hands behind his back. Oh, shoot. Seats. He tucked his wings in as tight as possible, but it didn't help. He would just have to crouch behind the front seats to avoid sitting on and breaking his feathers. As they pulled out, he noticed the ambulance. He slapped on the back glass, "Hey! Aren't you going to take her to the hospital? Or..." his voice quivered, "or the m-mortuary? You can't just leave her there! Does her family know? Hey!" Gage slapped the glass, harder, but the police in the front simply fiddled with the radio dial. "Please! She needs something! Have you no respect? S-she..." his hand squealed as it ran down the wall. He pressed his face to the window, and for the first time since this all started, for the first time since he had tried to be a hero, he cried. He didn't care if the others saw. He didn't care about anything anymore. His life was falling apart. He had never been arrested. Not even so much as a littering ticket, and now in the course of two days, he had ruined everybody's lives.

the 3rd part: Gage shrugged off the greeting. No one wanted to be friends with him, He would only get them in trouble. Or worse, forget about them and leave them to die. Images crossed his mind. How had Tor died? Had it been quick? Or slow and painful? His body shuddered as he suppressed a sob. He belonged here. If anyone in this room did, it was him.

and crows reaction: Crow flew through the sky, his mind numb. He finally landed in an alleyway and transformed into a human. He leaned against the cold wall of a building. I shouldn't have left them.... they'll end up dead.... like Tor. He slid down to a sitting position, arms wrapped around his head. What have I done? I've failed them.... Suddenly Crow felt tears gathering in his eyes. He tried to wipe them away, but it didn't work. So he cried. He cried for his friends, he cried for Tor, and he cried for the family he would never meet.....
 
Laodicia said:
first part in scene 7:
Crow bobbed his head, "Caw." He was still in crow form, so he wasn't worried about getting caught. As for the others....

Gage nodded. "Maybe we should just send Crow-" But then he noticed the ambulance. Someone pushed a stretcher, and it covered a body too small to be one of the thugs. As they loaded it into the truck, he caught a glimpse of a shoe. A small cowboy boot.

Crow stared at Gage, waiting for him to finish. Then he realized that he was looking at something. He followed his gaze and saw the boot. Slowly, his brain connected the dots. Oh....

Gage couldn't breathe. Tor. It couldn't be. His throat burned. Not her. Oh, please don't let it be her! He fell to his knees in the filth. Her truck... they had taken her truck. How could they have forgotten her? His body felt weak, and his hand quivered as he raised it to his face.

second part in scene 8: Gage let the cop bind his wings ** didn't cuff him because all following scenes gage's hands are free** as he sat there, shaking his head. How could this have happened? It had all started out so innocent, so good, and yet here they were. Himself, Farren, and Finely, all in chains. And Tor... oh, Tor. His heart hurt to think about her. His face heated up, but there were no tears left. Never would he forgive himself. Never. They took Gage out to the car and shoved him in. There was a mild stench of vomit in the car. He slid in,, hands behind his back. Oh, shoot. Seats. He tucked his wings in as tight as possible, but it didn't help. He would just have to crouch behind the front seats to avoid sitting on and breaking his feathers. As they pulled out, he noticed the ambulance. He slapped on the back glass, "Hey! Aren't you going to take her to the hospital? Or..." his voice quivered, "or the m-mortuary? You can't just leave her there! Does her family know? Hey!" Gage slapped the glass, harder, but the police in the front simply fiddled with the radio dial. "Please! She needs something! Have you no respect? S-she..." his hand squealed as it ran down the wall. He pressed his face to the window, and for the first time since this all started, for the first time since he had tried to be a hero, he cried. He didn't care if the others saw. He didn't care about anything anymore. His life was falling apart. He had never been arrested. Not even so much as a littering ticket, and now in the course of two days, he had ruined everybody's lives.

the 3rd part: Gage shrugged off the greeting. No one wanted to be friends with him, He would only get them in trouble. Or worse, forget about them and leave them to die. Images crossed his mind. How had Tor died? Had it been quick? Or slow and painful? His body shuddered as he suppressed a sob. He belonged here. If anyone in this room did, it was him.

and crows reaction: Crow flew through the sky, his mind numb. He finally landed in an alleyway and transformed into a human. He leaned against the cold wall of a building. I shouldn't have left them.... they'll end up dead.... like Tor. He slid down to a sitting position, arms wrapped around his head. What have I done? I've failed them.... Suddenly Crow felt tears gathering in his eyes. He tried to wipe them away, but it didn't work. So he cried. He cried for his friends, he cried for Tor, and he cried for the family he would never meet.....
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Oh. I thought you were talking about her death scene. Oops.
 
the only thing in scene 3 is that when gage is ordering people around rex grab nutmeg, mikki find jenna etc. Tor isnt mentioned at all. she never got out. gage forgot her.
 
yes i realize no one else is currently online. Nutmeg was not at rivers. she went home after bad guy apt. raid.
 

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