(Yep! They're accepted.)
"Horses!" He cried at Star. He saw a mare trapped in a crate that floated in the ocean. Raven called for Hero to stay with the mares as he galloped back to shore. He whinnied frantically as he pushed through the water. The water rose slowly to his feet making it harder for him to move forward. Finally the water was above his shoulders and he began to swim to one crate. Noticing that there were two crates he nickered loudly calling out for someone to help him. He tore the the crate with his teeth fastly, wanting to get this mare out so that he could help the other one.
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Grace stood still for a moment. "There's not much grass here. But..." She said thoughtfully, carefully stumbling towards a tree. "This is a Willow tree. We can eat the bark of it until we find more food. It doesn't taste good but it will hold us off for a while.
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Crowe looked towards the herd. She saw a mare turn away from the herd and become lost. Crowe trotted towards her as she walked deeper in the woods. " Stop!" She shouted, trying to grab the mares attention. (She sees Annabelle)