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[DuckyGurl]

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Jamar grabbed the gazelle "We'll be seeing you later then" He sneered, backing further into EmberPride territory. Arrow and Andrew followed

There's a gap between StormPride and EmberPride. Plus, all three of them are pretty beaten up.

Yes, extremely!

Adayna yelped and fell to the ground. She pretended that she had passed out. When Arrow wasn't looking she got up and ran around the side of the rock. She managed to get up on the rock and jump onto his back. Her force made him fall over, and she clawed his belly, leaving gashes.​

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

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Jamar grabbed the gazelle "We'll be seeing you later then" He sneered, backing further into EmberPride territory. Arrow and Andrew followed

There's a gap between StormPride and EmberPride. Plus, all three of them are pretty beaten up.

And they dragged it across the border, they aren't beaten up enough to not be able to walk

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

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There's a gap between StormPride and EmberPride. Plus, all three of them are pretty beaten up.

Yes, extremely!

Adayna yelped and fell to the ground. She pretended that she had passed out. When Arrow wasn't looking she got up and ran around the side of the rock. She managed to get up on the rock and jump onto his back. Her force made him fall over, and she clawed his belly, leaving gashes.
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I seen your posts

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

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There's a gap between StormPride and EmberPride. Plus, all three of them are pretty beaten up.

And they dragged it across the border, they aren't beaten up enough to not be able to walk

Ah. And yeah, but they're probably squirting blood all over the place, and are in pretty bad agony.

As they slipped across away from the border, Hafidha took the gazelle into a tight hold and flung it far across StormPride. She knocked Jamar down and slashed her claws against his already bloody chest and let out a snarl. The lioness backed up slowly, watching them as she left, her ears still back and her whole teeth in a snarl.

 

[DuckyGurl]

Adaya stood next to her, snarling viciously.

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

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And they dragged it across the border, they aren't beaten up enough to not be able to walk

Ah. And yeah, but they're probably squirting blood all over the place, and are in pretty bad agony.

As they slipped across away from the border, Hafidha took the gazelle into a tight hold and flung it far across StormPride. She knocked Jamar down and slashed her claws against his already bloody chest and let out a snarl. The lioness backed up slowly, watching them as she left, her ears still back and her whole teeth in a snarl.

(you can't fling a gazelle halfway across the territory)

Gimbya and Camila, alerted by the noise came running out of the bushes. Gimbya ran into StormPride to retreive the gazelle and brought it back into EmberPride territory. Camila attacked Hafida, viciously ripping into her hide and snapping her ribs with her powerful jaws. She shoved the other lioness to the ground and raked her claws across her face, ripping one of her eyes out and shredding her left ear. With one last lunge she tore the lioness's throat so badly she passed out from loss of blood. She helped Jamar, Arrow and Andrew over the border and stood facing the StormPride lions. "We're done here" She growled, leading her warriors away with the gazelle.

 

[DuckyGurl]

Adayna lay on the ground, her body convulsing.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

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Ah. And yeah, but they're probably squirting blood all over the place, and are in pretty bad agony.

As they slipped across away from the border, Hafidha took the gazelle into a tight hold and flung it far across StormPride. She knocked Jamar down and slashed her claws against his already bloody chest and let out a snarl. The lioness backed up slowly, watching them as she left, her ears still back and her whole teeth in a snarl.

(you can't fling a gazelle halfway across the territory)

Gimbya and Camila, alerted by the noise came running out of the bushes. Gimbya ran into StormPride to retreive the gazelle and brought it back into EmberPride territory. Camila attacked Hafida, viciously ripping into her hide and snapping her ribs with her powerful jaws. She shoved the other lioness to the ground and raked her claws across her face, ripping one of her eyes out and shredding her left ear. With one last lunge she tore the lioness's throat so badly she passed out from loss of blood. She helped Jamar, Arrow and Andrew over the border and stood facing the StormPride lions. "We're done here" She growled, leading her warriors away with the gazelle.

(I didn't, but it went through it. And you can't mortally injure my character so s/he's missing body parts.)

 

[DuckyGurl]

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[Zinnia-Hen]

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Loss of blood is fine. So is breaking bones and taking out useless body parts, or tearing the skin and etc. I just don't really appreciate it when someone tears out a body part or takes away something REALLY important without really asking