Try blending the lines before erasing them.Thank you! And yes please!!! Suggestions are so welcome! She has blonde hair, not light bleach blonde but not really dark blonde, kind of a strawberry blonde shade that looks gold in the sun, I think I could definitely darken it though to add some contrast!
I used a 2H graphite pencil for the entire drawing except for a few shaded areas with an HB. I'm sometimes hesitant to use a softer B pencil for drawings as they aren't as forgiving if you need to erase anything, but I'm definitely going to bring out my B pencils for this! I agree on the neck lines, as it would give it a more natural shadow. (I'm used to hard shadows on cartoon characters so my blending is not the best!) And softer shading makes sense for realism.
I thought something looked off with her nose, and I think your advice will fix it! I'll add a shadow above her nostrils to contour it. Thanks! The eyes are my favorite part to draw. I was worried the placement of the hair highlights were off, as I sometimes struggle with the placement of highlights and shadows, as my friend is no longer sitting in front of me as a reference.
I truly appreciate the constructive criticism! Here are most of the pencils I use for my drawings, the Faber-Castells are my favorites and I have a few more not included in the photo.
Try Fabre Castells goldfaber collection.
And I use that white thing - it feels like tissue paper rapped up for blending and smudging .
