Anyone wanna critique my carton label idea?

[Whispering Winds]

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that is what I think too!!! People like unique~~

 

[WriterofWords]

I think it's really cute, the only suggestion is a smaller comb on the one saying "Eat my eggs!" it kind of looks like a roo with the bigger comb.

 

[ArizonaDesertChicks]

It's cute. I see others noticed that the lines are the popdoor & ramp, which I didn't get when I first saw the label. I thought they were lines pointing to the words large and brown. The ramp door looks like it's pointing at the chicken's butt (brown). Since some people don't like to think of where they're eggs actually come from (like which part of a chicken), I'd remove the lines or reposition that one. Other than that, I like it!

 

[catwalk]

It's really cute!

 

[The Chicken Lady]

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My thoughts exactly. Very cute!

 

[Chick-a-roos]

I love your lable! I think the "stick" chickens are sooooo CUTE!

Good luck...I can't wait to have my first egg!