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Hey, is her page-right arm a little to forced? Like, its a dramatic position for just holding a necklace. What think?
I don't think so, I didn't even notice the necklace I was assuming it was like that with the way she's walking and holding a sword, as a balance type thing.
 
I don't think so, I didn't even notice the necklace I was assuming it was like that with the way she's walking and holding a sword, as a balance type thing.
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Hey, is her page-right arm a little to forced? Like, its a dramatic position for just holding a necklace. What think?

Yeah, the necklace arm is feeling a bit unnatural.
If you want the necklace to be noticeable, you'd have to break form. Which means you could redraw it and have her holding it above her head or have it around her neck. :P
 
Yeah, the necklace arm is feeling a bit unnatural.
If you want the necklace to be noticeable, you'd have to break form. Which means you could redraw it and have her holding it above her head or have it around her neck. :p
I don't feel like I need it to be really noticeable. I think I'll let the stabby-thing be the main item. However, I well be moving the arm, so it might break form below a little bit? Maybe? We'll see.
Thank you ^w^
 

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