It wasn’t meant to be posted on here. That’s why it’s a funky angle xDWho is dis.
I think maybe you need to start working on your lineart a bit. Not the structure, but more the weight of the lines. I know you were skeptical a certain way of drawing hair, so maybe you're kind of the same way about the whole manga style? A lot of art today is influenced by comic and manga art, so I think maybe that could be the next step for you. Lineart is a BIG deal in those two areas, sometimes the only thing. Check out some tutorials and show me what you come up with!
Finger is on top of the other.
I’ve made more progress since this but I don’t have any new pics of it.