Bebop's websites - opinions wanted and also just showing off!

[Bebop]

Here are my websites:

Zombie Bear Designs
www.freewebs.com/zombiebeardesigns
This is my website for my pet stuff. It's not completely finished. I wholesale to nearby pet stores and sell custom things retail on this website.

Bebop's Shop
www.bebop.etsy.com
I "made" it a year ago and recently started putting more on it. Still need to put more stuff on it. This is for my plants, seeds, homemade bags, earrings, and stuffed animals. I also sell my pet stuff on here from time to time.

Please let me know what you think! I'll be posting pictures for critiques and opinions! I've been selling things since I was 16 and still a newbie at selling online!
Thanks!
>^.^<

 

[Karlachix]

I checked out your freeweb web site. The pouches are so cute! I like the way they are named after Japanese foods (sushi, onigiri) and can be made pork style for guinea pigs. Everything looked well-made and comfy. I liked that the ordering instructions were clear.

Critique portion:
On the home page integrate is spelled wrong.
At the very top of each page the word Design is spelled Desig.
On the ordering page I would remove the sentence "I realized I forgot to let you know how to order and contact me" and change custom stuff to custom orders. (just my opinion.)

 

[Bebop]

THANKS!
I haven't updated in a while, so I missed those!
Thanks so much!