Fog - that 2nd boy - better color balance, but his comb looks funky - in the first pic. It looks partially carnation in type, or does he have side springs(?) Some breeders used Penedesenca as an outcross, and this is a telltale sign of that, if he has side sprigs.
He also has a very upright body; the angle he carries himself at is too high (too uphill), at least in my amateur opinion. He does have a nice, long back. Tail angle is good, and tail is not too long (sometimes you see the WAY long tails...I don't know if it's a point deduction or not, but I feel like the preference is for a shorter tail). His eyes may be a bit too light, and his neck is short, but it could be that he's jsut holding it in. His shank feathering is incomplete, but that's an easy fix.
Debbi, I've done so (bred overmelanised roo to overmelanised hens) not purposely, I have to admit, did it because I thought it was the right thing to do. What I got was pure black hens, and overmelanised roos - even moreso than I started with.
Wendy - just from the pics you posted, and it's hard to tell, to me, they look a bit light. I realize they're young, so they have more time to grow. But, in my experience, Bev's line typically shows both sexes to have broader and deeper chests. But, again, they are young, and it could be that they dropped some weight in the stress of moving them...my very best Bev hen is quite dark as well, having just a bit of copper coloring in her hackles.