Book- Two Worlds Collide

[luvinmychickens]

Yay! It's back!!

I think I might bring back an old story, but rename it.

Maizie's Life isn't inspiring me too much.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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What story?

 

[luvinmychickens]

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What story?

Hmm..... I gotta find it, and then make it because I had it locked.

You'll see it in a few.

 

[luvinmychickens]

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What story?

Hmm..... I gotta find it, and then make it because I had it locked.

You'll see it in a few.

Oops! I forgot something...

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[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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Hmm..... I gotta find it, and then make it because I had it locked.

You'll see it in a few.

Oops! I forgot something...

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Way cool, I love these smileys.

Can't wait to see it!

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Oops! I forgot something...

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Way cool, I love these smileys.

Can't wait to see it!

Hmm... I need you ta help me...

Should I bring back this story? https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=591271
Or should I make something with action and stuff like that?

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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Way cool, I love these smileys.

Can't wait to see it!

Hmm... I need you ta help me...

Should I bring back this story? https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=591271
Or should I make something with action and stuff like that?

Yes, but ... change the plot. Add problems, inconveniences, troubles, things that must be solved, to attract the interest of the reader to find out how/when/if the problem is fixed, the inconvenience is handled or gotten rid of, the troubles solved ... and you'll find that more people are interested in your story, and you have more to write about.

That said, night!

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Hmm... I need you ta help me...

Should I bring back this story? https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=591271
Or should I make something with action and stuff like that?

Yes, but ... change the plot. Add problems, inconveniences, troubles, things that must be solved, to attract the interest of the reader to find out how/when/if the problem is fixed, the inconvenience is handled or gotten rid of, the troubles solved ... and you'll find that more people are interested in your story, and you have more to write about.

That said, night!

Okay thanks.

 

[Fierlin1182]

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SPAWK! *shrieks like a banshee* You have no idea how long I've been waiting for someone to say that!

We should make a club.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

I'm a terrible book writer, aren't I?

This whole new BYC is kinda confusing me..and I haven't had much time for anything. Sorry!!